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  • RayZor - Turns (freeverse)

    Here's something I put together in less than an hour.
    Heard this beat playing on Spotify... Dj Babu's Why Fair instrumental, thought I'd throw a few lines on it.
    lIts only 1min 25secs long, half of it is the hook. I tried to write something relating to the hook, so thoughts would be nice.

    I actually wrote this one down, but lemme know what ya think. Recorded and editted on Audacity.

    The instrumental is short, so now room for more lines. But I plan to extend the instrumental, and feature someone else on the track. idk



    If ya wanna use the beat, here it is: Dj Babu - Why Fair instrumental (Direct file link: right click to save)


    Feedbacks:
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...wednesday.html
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...k-my-life.html
    Last edited by RaYZoR; 02-02-2013, 03:54 PM.

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    sorry guys didn't realize this was on private. Here you go

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    • #3
      Definitely work on your vocal production and delivery a bit. Not bad though 3/5.

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      • #4
        Originally posted by __cas__ View Post
        Definitely work on your vocal production and delivery a bit. Not bad though 3/5.
        Idk, I notice if I try and rap, after like a few lines, my words sound gargled up...probably from all that saliva lol

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