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  • #25
    Myk: man this is one of your best verses I've heard in awhile. You sound like you wanted to do this one. Sometimes you sound bored on the track. This one is Machete Myk all the way my nigga. Murked this shit. Honestly my favorite verse on this, hands down.

    YC: This was a step up for you. Your story telling is there man you just gotta work out the lyrics. Your lyrics should compliment your flow. The go hand in hand. Add in more multies. It'll make you sound more fluid. Makes the flow work so much better.

    Caze: I'm sure I've heard you before just can't think of anything else at the moment. The flow is beastin dude. Just keep working. With more tracks you'll sound more comfortable. The writing and flow is there you just gotta gain the comfort-ability and you'll be there man.

    Kash: That Aaliyah line was hard to take man. Loved her. But anyway lol, I don't think you really sound like your trying to be Wayne on this. Had some cold punches, which are few and far between with him lately lol. We gotta get some work in five.

    Myk killed it.

    MC_Crary: THAT NIGGA

    Comet: One of my favorite artist around here lately. Always bring something interesting to the table. If Myk hadn't fucked this beat in the ass you woulda had my favorite verse man. Love the improvement. I'd love to get do a few tracks with you too if you're down.

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    • #26
      Originally posted by MC_Crary View Post
      Myk: man this is one of your best verses I've heard in awhile. You sound like you wanted to do this one. Sometimes you sound bored on the track. This one is Machete Myk all the way my nigga. Murked this shit. Honestly my favorite verse on this, hands down.

      YC: This was a step up for you. Your story telling is there man you just gotta work out the lyrics. Your lyrics should compliment your flow. The go hand in hand. Add in more multies. It'll make you sound more fluid. Makes the flow work so much better.

      Caze: I'm sure I've heard you before just can't think of anything else at the moment. The flow is beastin dude. Just keep working. With more tracks you'll sound more comfortable. The writing and flow is there you just gotta gain the comfort-ability and you'll be there man.

      Kash: That Aaliyah line was hard to take man. Loved her. But anyway lol, I don't think you really sound like your trying to be Wayne on this. Had some cold punches, which are few and far between with him lately lol. We gotta get some work in five.

      Myk killed it.

      MC_Crary: THAT NIGGA

      Comet: One of my favorite artist around here lately. Always bring something interesting to the table. If Myk hadn't fucked this beat in the ass you woulda had my favorite verse man. Love the improvement. I'd love to get do a few tracks with you too if you're down.
      thanx for the feed homie, u probably heard me on the birdcall remix
      Hip Hop Ain't Dead It Just Had A Heart Attack
      But You See I Keep It Pumpin' Yea I Got That Heart Back
      So Just Call Me....
      "Little Carter" Or "Little Cardiac"

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      • #27
        Originally posted by Young Mula Fan View Post
        please tell me what u think of my verse bruh, even if u dont feel it, i want to improve as much as possible
        theres not much I can say. i honestly had to go listen to the song again because I didn't even remember your verse... not one bit of it. your flow was just really choppy. i don't even think you had one line in your verse that I can quote and say was dope. and you didn't even really seem comfortable rapping at all. not to be a dick, but I can't really pick out one good thing to say about your verse. i been seeing you posted shit in the index thread about your upcoming mixape or something, but if it sounds like this I think you need to get back to drawing board and just redo it. no hate, just giving my honest opinion.

        now that was about the verse up to 2:10. after that it was dope.






        & after listening again, Kash had a pretty decent verse. just sounds too much like wayne. theres no way you aren't biting, everything about you is biting him.



        protect dunston at all costs

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        • #28
          Originally posted by PrettyFlacko. View Post
          theres not much I can say. i honestly had to go listen to the song again because I didn't even remember your verse... not one bit of it. your flow was just really choppy. i don't even think you had one line in your verse that I can quote and say was dope. and you didn't even really seem comfortable rapping at all. not to be a dick, but I can't really pick out one good thing to say about your verse. i been seeing you posted shit in the index thread about your upcoming mixape or something, but if it sounds like this I think you need to get back to drawing board and just redo it. no hate, just giving my honest opinion.

          now that was about the verse up to 2:10. after that it was dope.






          & after listening again, Kash had a pretty decent verse. just sounds too much like wayne. theres no way you aren't biting, everything about you is biting him.
          appreciate the honesty bro, just to make sure but are u sayin im biting waynes style?
          Last edited by Young Mula Fan; 02-22-2013, 04:25 AM.
          Hip Hop Ain't Dead It Just Had A Heart Attack
          But You See I Keep It Pumpin' Yea I Got That Heart Back
          So Just Call Me....
          "Little Carter" Or "Little Cardiac"

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          • #29
            Originally posted by Young Mula Fan View Post
            appreciate the honesty bro, just to make sure but are u sayin im biting waynes style?



            protect dunston at all costs

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            • #30
              Do you honestly know me to say everything about me is biting wayne.
              I dont say your biting Cheif Keif.... .... no worries though ima still do wtf i do and you just keep judging my nikka
              Last edited by tmillzy; 02-22-2013, 06:11 AM.
              I Remember everything...JUSS KNOW
              FERINA OMO or Die

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              • #31
                Originally posted by tmillzy View Post
                Do you honestly know me to say everything about me is biting wayne.
                I dont say your biting Cheif Keif....



                protect dunston at all costs

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                • #32
                  Comet who mixes your shit?
                  Hip Hop Ain't Dead It Just Had A Heart Attack
                  But You See I Keep It Pumpin' Yea I Got That Heart Back
                  So Just Call Me....
                  "Little Carter" Or "Little Cardiac"

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                  • #33
                    Great verses, I digg most of em. Except the guy that wanna be Wayne.

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                    • #34
                      fuck this thread man. yall some bitches str8 up
                      I Remember everything...JUSS KNOW
                      FERINA OMO or Die

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                      • #35
                        Originally posted by Young Mula Fan View Post
                        Comet who mixes your shit?
                        me.. y

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                        • #36
                          Originally posted by KidComet View Post
                          me.. y
                          dam how did all yall learn to mix so well?
                          Hip Hop Ain't Dead It Just Had A Heart Attack
                          But You See I Keep It Pumpin' Yea I Got That Heart Back
                          So Just Call Me....
                          "Little Carter" Or "Little Cardiac"

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