Tranquil - Back In The Day

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Yo what's up guys. Been pretty busy lately, I have been getting heavy into pro-tools, progressing in beat making aswell as writting music. This is just a sneak peak of a song I'm working on called Back In The Day, still have to do ad-libs and what not to it. Give it a listen and tell me what you think! Any pointers/tips are highly welcomed

Song:
Back In The Day (Not Final Mix) - YouTube

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[Mr. Swag]

I like it! Beat is simple but nice, although your accent is pretty strong I don't mind it

Good work

[Tha Professor]

pretty simple beat but its nice. cool lyrics about music being your life. aussie flow is listenable but could be expanded more
3.5/5

[mykill]

You make the beat yourself? It's really good...

You have something going on with your songs that's pretty good. Bars are thought out and that's great. I wish there was more multies in what you did, not to an extent where its too much. Just to accentuate the song more. You gotta also work on variety with your flow. You kinda got that run-on sentence thing going. You gotta jazz it up. This is just a demo/preview, but some more energy would go a long way.

Overall: 3.6/5