rembrandt - the graduate

[ATLien666]

just wrote and recorded this. a few late night thoughts.



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[ATLien666]

I take it nobody was feelin' this?

on retrospect, I really ain't either, so can't blame ya. lmao.

[mykill]

I take it nobody was feelin' this?

on retrospect, I really ain't either, so can't blame ya. lmao.

Words arent bad... Just... nothing fits together... Take those lyrics and put it to another beat...

[thiskid]

Flow wasn't bad, lyrics are decent. Maybe a different tempo beat would help you! Keep posting, ill keep listening!

[ATLien666]

Words arent bad... Just... nothing fits together... Take those lyrics and put it to another beat...

yeah, I was kinda drunk when I recorded this and I liked the inconsistency and non-rap feel to it, but now it's like eh. lmao.

[Tha Professor]

I like this beat choice, you should check you jay electronica if you wanna be on that movie score, no drums, swag. You could do it to be honest, u just need to fix the flow up and make it tighter, nah mean? Fux wit the creativity
2.85/5

[trillphill]

I take it nobody was feelin' this?

on retrospect, I really ain't either, so can't blame ya. lmao.

It's nice to know the feeling is mutual.

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

It's nice to know the feeling is mutual.

damn he keeps it trill

[ATLien666]

damn he keeps it trill

you gon' have to step your game up with this nigga around.

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

you gon' have to step your game up with this nigga around.

you will as well have to step your game up with this nigga around