Quick Freestyles

[romanreloaded]

These are parts of my friends song, just freestyle versions not final studio recording lol


Freestyles 1&2.mp3

[mykill]

Half the time you can't understand what you're saying. Flow falls off a lot. Sounds like you're trying to hide your rapping, are your parents in the house? Sometimes what your saying is just gibberish.

Tips:
-Get more confident on the mic.
-Stop freestyling right now. You're not Lil' Wayne or any other good rapper that can freestyle....
-...that said, get your flow and delivery down before you try something like this. It's a good exercise, but honestly this horrible. Why even post it?
-Stop spammin' the board. If it aint hot, we are not gonna listen to it. THIS is not hot. Plus the whole rules thing. You gotta pay homage to someone else's work before you start plastering your shit on here.
-BACK TO THE MUSIC: mixing was iffy too. You using just a laptop or webcam mic or something? Get a decent mic or at least, dont sit so close to it.
-Once you get your flow and delivery stuff down, try writing a song FIRST. When you get an elementary knowledge of crafting bars, THEN TRY THE FREESTYLE THING AGAIN.

Thanks for playing... and btw:

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