She Dont Put It Down

[yungfamou5]

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[mykill]

This is a good beat...

Sadly, I think it was wasted on Joey. I like Joe Budden at times, but this song missed its mark. Tank was ok, but the hook would be better delivered by a Trey Songs or a Chris Brown. ANYWAYS!

Seems like you got some personal lyrics on here. Maybe you were in a "Tahiry" situation as well lol. Solid freestyle though. A lot of good bars and consistent speedy flow. Great job fam, yet the only thing that knocks this down a few notches is the quality. You sound kinda distorted. Adlibs are on point as usual. Maybe use a little more reverb in your vocals to give them a bit more depth. Phaser/Delay effect at the end was pretty good.

Overall: 3.8/5

[yungfamou5]

Appreciate it. Yea ima f wit it some more I think I use some effect on the vocals dat made it more distorted

Thanks for the feed

[DeezyMac]

i hate joe budden but i like this beat so i'm glad someone decided to remix it . lol.

listening as i type this, so its a live review. The vocals seem unmixed and too raw and peaks a lot, but the adlibs on point. flow wise it's straight. rode the beat good. lyrics wise it's pretty basic (that achoo line was hella predictable) but the delivery makes up for it. If you can master this better, I'd definitely download. I fukk with this bruh. Wish it was longer, paws.

[Checkmatemuzick]

Deezy Mac couldn't have said it better your flow was solid and the lyrics were coo but if you get it mastered I believe it would do more damage 3/5 #RNS but Ima check you out in the future

[TonyFlow]

its good

[Laudacity93]

the mixing does affect the overall quality of the track. as stated above. I gotta go with Checkmatemuzick and give it a 3/5

[thiskid]

Flow may be a little off from chosen beat, lyrics were smart, maybe more complex would help out to better your raps. If you have anymore songs let me know and ill listen to them!

[ATLien666]

After all these tracks, it's time to get a new mic and/or up the mastering, bruh. lol.

You always have good flows and sound comfortable on the mic, too. Makes your songs a lot more listenable. You sound confident with all the shit you're saying. Lyrically eh. The aforementioned achoo line should've been scratched through a couple times, lol. Still fuck with this, honestly.

3.5/5

[walkerwiseman]

I like it. Nothing special and ive herd better from you but this was dope..

[tmillzy]

give it 3/5 homie mixing couldve been better thats it...

[DreezyBaby]

What software or mic you usee ? it was gucci, juss need sum more quality ... The flow was nice and the lyrics was gucci , You rode the beat right no homo lbvs ..

Flow: 4
Beat : 3.5
Overall : 3