Quick Lyrcial Spit

[Unknown]

check this shit as a bust out a respectable spit,
duck real quick before you catch my cynical spit,
so hard an lyrical your face will get split,
let rip, cause can I kick it course a can,
line's fresher than technology in japan,
my cypher's building a anathology a historical one,
cause their unforgetabble like the bible son,
idle them, my line's almost so perfect,
only thing wrong, ain't on audio yet,
suitable flow for any beat yo' lay down,
an all bust these lyrical bullet's so stay where,
you are, an a won't have to cut you into six piece's,
cause a can be more sinfull then what this sick shit is,

A short one

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: Quick Lyrcial Spit

pretty good..

[Young Luc]

Re: Quick Lyrcial Spit

not bad.

[Unknown]

Re: Quick Lyrcial Spit

Thnks...good to be back

[js11]

Re: Quick Lyrcial Spit

check this shit as a bust out a respectable spit,
duck real quick before you catch my cynical spit,
so hard an lyrical your face will get split,
let rip, cause can I kick it course a can,
line's fresher than technology in japan,
my cypher's building a anathology a historical one,
cause their unforgetabble like the bible son,
idle them, my line's almost so perfect,
only thing wrong, ain't on audio yet,
suitable flow for any beat yo' lay down,
an all bust these lyrical bullet's so stay where,
you are, an a won't have to cut you into six piece's,
cause a can be more sinfull then what this sick shit is,

A short one

sick stuff! pretty good

but if you add an "is"after bible where it says "the bible son"
that line would flow better
watch try it....