Yung Word Feat Onte - Killin Shit

[Yung_Word]

New Song By Me Called Killin Shit, It Go Hard AF Check It Out.
https://soundcloud.com/yung-word/yun...at-onte-killin

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[ATLien666]

This could be really dope if you add a lil' more to the chorus. No emotion changes from the verse to the chorus, so it kinda sounds like it all just runs together instead of flowing organically from verse to chorus to verse. I liked your verse, though. Nothing extremely lyrical, but something I could smoke to or swag out to. Flow was kinda laidback/lazy, but it works for the song. Shouldn't have let that energy transfer to the chorus, though. Second verse made me turn the song off.

3.8/5