SM Maniac- May Not Be One (Prod by Sourze)

[TupacShaquer]

What can I say? I like this .





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[MC_Crary]

What's a baller to David Stern?

Ill line. Man I've been saying it for awhile. Your content is there. Everyone's lyrics could always improve, everyone.But these beat is a little weird so I could see it being a bit hard too flow correctly on it, but your flow needs work. Sometimes you're doing well but most of the time your off man. I see your effort though man. Hit me up for another verse if you want, I got you. Let's try to write an original together, not just a cover.

[broc717]

you had some really good lines man, if I would say to fix anything I'd say work on your flow and your mic presence so you can strike the exact emotions that you want your listeners to feel.

[Laudacity93]

This is nice the meaning is there its just needs a better delivery. Displaying emotion on the track is good I learned that early in the rap game bro. 3/5

[Gibbsy]

this is tight man, I like the beat, and the flow is deffinatly on point for the most part, sometimes it sounds like your rushing through your words man that's the only issue I have , and the tags on this beat are really obvious, the hook? is a lil off too sounds like you got some delay on it or avnt matched up the libs properly still a decent piece of work though man 3.5/5

[DreezyBaby]

This different my dude, i fucks wit it ... Yo voice cool, and the lyrics flow but the way you deliver some lines be kinda off... just work on that and you good.

Lyrics/3
Flow/3
Beat/3.5
Overall/3.5