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  • SM Maniac- Dedication (Prod bu Sourze)

    This is basically dedicated to my aunt who was diagnosed with breast cancer stage 4, in which the survival rate is just 15%. But shit, I still have hope.



    I should be performing this soon near this club my uncle owns in Pennsylvania with her in the audience

    Feed:
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...s-dope-af.html
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...freestyle.html
    The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels


  • #2
    Betta watch your back, someone's gonna get you for that Pope shit man lol. But anyway, best flow I've heard from you. Inspiration is good for that though dude. This is a great dedication man, I just lost one of my Aunt last week so this hits home. Good luck to your aunt man and good luck on your performance.

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    • #3
      Originally posted by MC_Crary View Post
      Betta watch your back, someone's gonna get you for that Pope shit man lol. But anyway, best flow I've heard from you. Inspiration is good for that though dude. This is a great dedication man, I just lost one of my Aunt last week so this hits home. Good luck to your aunt man and good luck on your performance.
      Lmao I knew someone would say something about it , which is why i was like "nah thats to far"
      Good lucks tho , I just went with the beat and the words just came out with how I felt. Major track coming towards you soon so get ready to write some hot shit
      The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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      • #4
        First of all the flow to me sounds not so good and as well as your annunciation. I guess u talkin real, but i feel like it could have been executed much better, maybe u rushed it?

        2.4/5



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        • #5
          Tryna get some more feed since the two above are different , want to know what to work on.
          The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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          • #6
            this is dope man, your improvement is insane, your flow is dope on this and the mixing/mastering sounds crisp man speshially your levels on adlibs etc, this is a nice track man, a couple of tiny slurs in words but that's it deffo a 4.5/5 man nice work !


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            • #7
              Originally posted by Gibbsy View Post
              this is dope man, your improvement is insane, your flow is dope on this and the mixing/mastering sounds crisp man speshially your levels on adlibs etc, this is a nice track man, a couple of tiny slurs in words but that's it deffo a 4.5/5 man nice work !
              Appreciate the listen , Imma get you on a track soon as well
              The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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              • #8
                Originally posted by TupacShaquer View Post
                This is basically dedicated to my aunt who was diagnosed with breast cancer stage 4, in which the survival rate is just 15%. But shit, I still have hope.



                I should be performing this soon near this club my uncle owns in Pennsylvania with her in the audience

                Feed:
                http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...s-dope-af.html
                http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...freestyle.html
                Good to hear. Also a dope track!!! Lyrics go deep! Inspirational.


                The 6ix god is watching i hope you prepared to face em

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                • #9
                  well this sounds much better than back then
                  thats not too hard though lol
                  but in this you had a consistent flow, and you have a better mic/mixing?

                  beat fits well with the subject also

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by wayniac number1 View Post
                    well this sounds much better than back then
                    thats not too hard though lol
                    but in this you had a consistent flow, and you have a better mic/mixing?

                    beat fits well with the subject also
                    Appreciate it , and yeah better mixing.
                    The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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