Kash- B***h Appetite (Radio Edit)

[tmillzy]

New Album/Radio single had to upload the clean edit. Explicit Version will be on itunes next wednesday!

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[mykill]

Hook is weak... When you did the radio edit, it might've sound better if you changed "bitch" to "trick" or something of that nature. Without something like that, its hard for a listener to really discern what you have an "appetite" for. It's implied by the lyrics, but most radio listeners get hooked on a song by the hook. That's the part they remember before anything else. Take Wayne's "Rich as Fuck". In the radio edit they say "Rich as ----" and you get a better feel for what they mean in that instance. Or Kendrick's "Bitch don't kill my vibe". He replaces it with "trick". You could have even done "a Chick Appetite" because its still rhymes. I hate Lil Wayne's radio edits for the sheer fact that 1/2 the song is bleeped out. If you're gonna be that abrasive with your lyrics, then dont even put the shit on the radio.

Verses were decent, but I feel like I've heard better from you. For a radio song, I think it works, but I'm conflicted in really liking this because I feel like the concept has been done to death. If its any consolation, even though I think the hook is weak, it potential to be catchy and stick. Just needs stronger delivery. Your vocals song kinda low, but it could just be my speakers.

Mykill's Verdit: 3.3/5

[tmillzy]

Hook is weak... When you did the radio edit, it might've sound better if you changed "bitch" to "trick" or something of that nature. Without something like that, its hard for a listener to really discern what you have an "appetite" for. It's implied by the lyrics, but most radio listeners get hooked on a song by the hook. That's the part they remember before anything else. Take Wayne's "Rich as Fuck". In the radio edit they say "Rich as ----" and you get a better feel for what they mean in that instance. Or Kendrick's "Bitch don't kill my vibe". He replaces it with "trick". You could have even done "a Chick Appetite" because its still rhymes. I hate Lil Wayne's radio edits for the sheer fact that 1/2 the song is bleeped out. If you're gonna be that abrasive with your lyrics, then dont even put the shit on the radio.

Verses were decent, but I feel like I've heard better from you. For a radio song, I think it works, but I'm conflicted in really liking this because I feel like the concept has been done to death. If its any consolation, even though I think the hook is weak, it potential to be catchy and stick. Just needs stronger delivery. Your vocals song kinda low, but it could just be my speakers.

Mykill's Verdit: 3.3/5

Yeah your right didnt think to add trick instead of bitch. The explicit hook does sound better though. Thanks for the feedback!

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

stop the autotune, its very annoying in this.
reminds me of wayne and that "no worries" song.

sounds like you recorded this in a studio though, its good quality.

[tmillzy]

stop the autotune, its very annoying in this.
reminds me of wayne and that "no worries" song.

sounds like you recorded this in a studio though, its good quality.

Thanks but the autotune is barely turned on in this song

[MC_Crary]

Hate radio edits, one day they'll realize they're not saving anyone's ears by cutting out the curses lol. Need to have a full version to make a real, judgement but I feel like you could have dropped something harder. Punches seem redundant. She tall as glass. Come on bro, you're much better than that. And the parts where you're saying Young Kash sounds weird. Vocals on that need something. Almost sound unmixed. JUst that part though, other than mixing is A1.

[tmillzy]

Hate radio edits, one day they'll realize they're not saving anyone's ears by cutting out the curses lol. Need to have a full version to make a real, judgement but I feel like you could have dropped something harder. Punches seem redundant. She tall as glass. Come on bro, you're much better than that. And the parts where you're saying Young Kash sounds weird. Vocals on that need something. Almost sound unmixed. JUst that part though, other than mixing is A1.

Lol you coming at me mad hard lmao i can take constructive critisism tho but you never heard the phrase "she taller than a glass of water"???

[MC_Crary]

Lol you coming at me mad hard lmao i can take constructive critisism tho but you never heard the phrase "she taller than a glass of water"???

Yeah I've heard it lol, a million times. You can be mad creative when you try but this sounds like a bunch of rehashed punches. Not trying to come at you man, just honest feed.

[tmillzy]

Yeah I've heard it lol, a million times. You can be mad creative when you try but this sounds like a bunch of rehashed punches. Not trying to come at you man, just honest feed.

Not offense took over here man everybody got they own opinion

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Tbh its just a single, me personally i fukk with it and not just cause its my song either.
I honestly cant see a harder to come at this song but who wants to hop onthe remix

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Tbh its just a single, me personally i fukk with it and not just cause its my song either.
I honestly cant see a harder to come at this song but who wants to hop onthe remix