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  • We In This Bitch (Unmixed)

    Just a album cut just putting it out early its not all the way mixed yet plus it has another verse on it (thats not included) leave feed back





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    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-put-down.html
    Last edited by tmillzy; 03-27-2013, 12:25 AM.
    I Remember everything...JUSS KNOW
    FERINA OMO or Die

  • #2
    You sound much more inspired on this than that last song. This has a subtle bounce to it. Feelin it.

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    • #3
      Cover looks a lot like the IANAHB2 one. JS lol.

      This was pretty dope tho, sounds a lot like Wayne, idek if you trying it or its your voice.

      The auto tune sounds dope on you, fits really well. Hook was decent , felt like you could have had little more energy , but still it worked.
      The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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      • #4
        Originally posted by TupacShaquer View Post
        Cover looks a lot like the IANAHB2 one. JS lol.

        This was pretty dope tho, sounds a lot like Wayne, idek if you trying it or its your voice.

        The auto tune sounds dope on you, fits really well. Hook was decent , felt like you could have had little more energy , but still it worked.
        lol not something im trying to do its just that ive got so many negative comments on me sounding like wayne i dont even care anymore but thanks man like i said its still not mixed all the way so the final is gonna sound different gotta rerecord some parts too

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        wow just got a bad rep cause somebody is hating on the song do a better song my nikka whoever you are
        I Remember everything...JUSS KNOW
        FERINA OMO or Die

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        • #5
          cover is a straight donda/IANAHB rip... make me think the wayne thing is straight trollin'

          you can hear where you hit the mic before you do the hook, or at least you breathe out too hard. Listening further, it might be just breathing on the mic. Mixing is really good on this. Yeah, its just plosives, nevermind about that hitting the mic comment. Would be nice if at the end of the hook you said "and you can never take us out, mu'fucka!". Give it a nice change up. As far as completing the concept and doing it well, you got 100%. Punches were good, but could be better. I'll leave some air for improvement as always.

          Mykill's Verdict: 4.3/5

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          • #6
            Originally posted by mykill View Post
            cover is a straight donda/IANAHB rip... make me think the wayne thing is straight trollin'

            you can hear where you hit the mic before you do the hook, or at least you breathe out too hard. Listening further, it might be just breathing on the mic. Mixing is really good on this. Yeah, its just plosives, nevermind about that hitting the mic comment. Would be nice if at the end of the hook you said "and you can never take us out, mu'fucka!". Give it a nice change up. As far as completing the concept and doing it well, you got 100%. Punches were good, but could be better. I'll leave some air for improvement as always.

            Mykill's Verdict: 4.3/5
            I didnt make the cover this graphic designer did it for me i told him it look too much like it but he never got back to me with a new cover yet.. But thanks for the feedback
            I Remember everything...JUSS KNOW
            FERINA OMO or Die

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            • #7
              Hope you trollin with this cover and these colours lol that would bring it to a new level

              Dope song though,you flow got something.
              You got my head noddin when both voices came in the hook
              this we in this bicht nigga is pretty uninspired but whatever,when the bass drops its just too good lol
              Last edited by wayniac number1; 03-28-2013, 07:09 AM.

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              • #8
                the lil wayne copycat troll strikes back. .Its cool though, because dreezy is doing chief keef now instead of wayne, so somebody had to do wayne.





                Originally posted by TupacShaquer View Post
                Cover looks a lot like the IANAHB2 one. JS lol.
                Originally posted by mykill View Post
                cover is a straight donda/IANAHB rip... make me think the wayne thing is straight trollin'
                Originally posted by wayniac number1 View Post
                Hope you trollin with this cover and these colours lol that would bring it to a new level

                Originally posted by tmillzy View Post
                i didnt make the cover this graphic designer did it for me i told him it look too much like it but he never got back to me with a new cover yet.. But thanks for the feedback
                fucking bullshitthere's been too many so-called "coincidence's" where you're copying wayne, and you have an excuse for it.
                if anyone believes him, he wins the best troll award.
                Last edited by lilchukieforeheadbig; 03-28-2013, 09:55 AM.

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by lilchukieforeheadbig View Post
                  the lil wayne copycat troll strikes back. .Its cool though, because dreezy is doing chief keef now instead of wayne, so somebody had to do wayne.














                  fucking bullshitthere's been too many so-called "coincidence's" where you're copying wayne, and you have an excuse for it.
                  if anyone believes him, he wins the best troll award.
                  realest nigga i know thanx for the s/o...thanks for listening my nigga
                  I Remember everything...JUSS KNOW
                  FERINA OMO or Die

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                  • #10
                    Wayne cover, Wayne sounding instrumental, you sound like wayne, wayne type of lines, wayne type of chorus. I just can't.

                    -100/10

                    Seven pounds line was dope as fuck, though. but seriously, just admit that Wayne is a big influence on your style of rapping. You're not a bad rapper at all, but I can't support a nigga that can't even be honest with his biting.
                    Last edited by ATLien666; 03-30-2013, 01:59 AM.


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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by ATLien666 View Post
                      Wayne cover, Wayne sounding instrumental, you sound like wayne, wayne type of lines, wayne type of chorus. I just can't.

                      -100/10

                      Seven pounds line was dope as fuck, though. but seriously, just admit that Wayne is a big influence on your style of rapping. You're not a bad rapper at all, but I can't support a nigga that can't even be honest with his biting.
                      My thoughts in a nutshell. lol
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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by ATLien666 View Post
                        Wayne cover, Wayne sounding instrumental, you sound like wayne, wayne type of lines, wayne type of chorus. I just can't.

                        -100/10

                        Seven pounds line was dope as fuck, though. but seriously, just admit that Wayne is a big influence on your style of rapping. You're not a bad rapper at all, but I can't support a nigga that can't even be honest with his biting.
                        I mean he is a big influence but i don't see what i do as biting i just happen to rap and sound like that its not forced at all i promise. the cover honestly has none to do with wayne though other than it being red and black majority of my covers are...the instrumental honestly dont see how it sounds like waynes stuff prolly just the way i rapped on it... the lines arent influenced by weezy cause i know he can say something 100x better than what i said...The chorus is just describing what the letters in my rap name mean (K.A.S.H Kill All Shit on H8ers). But no offense taken... I just realize now i really gotta work on some originality but even if i were to switch up to something else my voice is my voice its gonna sound the same my nigga!
                        I Remember everything...JUSS KNOW
                        FERINA OMO or Die

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