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  • #13
    Originally posted by Sam. View Post
    Daaaaaamn !!!! This is dope af!

    i swear the hook sounds like weezy lol. But isn't that a compliment ?

    I mean there sure is an influence but he's not copyin at all..

    gonna bump this on repeat!
    Idk to me i think hes to much a influence on me as far as how i rap
    I see what yall saying now gotta try to work on that but thanks for the positive feedback bro
    I Remember everything...JUSS KNOW
    FERINA OMO or Die

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    • #14
      This is dope bro!!! 5/5 Yo if you got any mixtapes or anything link me
      https://linktr.ee/sideshowkvlz

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      • #15
        So many people try to sound like Wayne or other artists and usually I hate them but there's something about your song. Not sure what it is, but it's great. Your flow was great, and for the 500th time you sound like Wayne, but not in an imitating way, more like an influenced way. On the hook it's crazy if someone didn't know better, he would think he's listening to Wayne for a bit. Lyrics lack a bit of substance to my taste but they're still good, rhymes are there. I really like that beat, too. Overall, I'd say 4/5.

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        • #16
          This is like my 3rd time listening to this song and I hear nothing but Wayne, but I guess I'm the only one that has a problem with that, lol

          Your flow is on point, though. I couldn't hear one time you slipped up and your mastering is pretty nice, too. You are the epitome of punchline rap, which isn't a problem, but that and the Wayne thing, it's hard for me to actually like you as an artist. Your songs are dope. The choruses are catchy and you even have nice punchlines (along with some shitty ones, but who doesn't.), but the Wayne thing feels more of an imitation instead of an influence, especially on this song. It's like everybody told you that you sound/rap like Wayne and instead of switching it up, you embraced it and out popped this song. It isn't a bad thing, as you can probably tell, but imo, you are backing yourself against a wall musically. You have talent, but no identity with it.

          4/5

          I like the song, but bruh, come on.


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          • #17
            Originally posted by ATLien666 View Post
            This is like my 3rd time listening to this song and I hear nothing but Wayne, but I guess I'm the only one that has a problem with that, lol

            Your flow is on point, though. I couldn't hear one time you slipped up and your mastering is pretty nice, too. You are the epitome of punchline rap, which isn't a problem, but that and the Wayne thing, it's hard for me to actually like you as an artist. Your songs are dope. The choruses are catchy and you even have nice punchlines (along with some shitty ones, but who doesn't.), but the Wayne thing feels more of an imitation instead of an influence, especially on this song. It's like everybody told you that you sound/rap like Wayne and instead of switching it up, you embraced it and out popped this song. It isn't a bad thing, as you can probably tell, but imo, you are backing yourself against a wall musically. You have talent, but no identity with it.

            4/5

            I like the song, but bruh, come on.
            now that's a feedback. that's how it should be done.


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            • #18
              Originally posted by ATLien666 View Post
              This is like my 3rd time listening to this song and I hear nothing but Wayne, but I guess I'm the only one that has a problem with that, lol

              Your flow is on point, though. I couldn't hear one time you slipped up and your mastering is pretty nice, too. You are the epitome of punchline rap, which isn't a problem, but that and the Wayne thing, it's hard for me to actually like you as an artist. Your songs are dope. The choruses are catchy and you even have nice punchlines (along with some shitty ones, but who doesn't.), but the Wayne thing feels more of an imitation instead of an influence, especially on this song. It's like everybody told you that you sound/rap like Wayne and instead of switching it up, you embraced it and out popped this song. It isn't a bad thing, as you can probably tell, but imo, you are backing yourself against a wall musically. You have talent, but no identity with it.

              4/5

              I like the song, but bruh, come on.
              Probably the best feedback i have ever gotten. What people dont understand that after you listen to fav artist for so long and once you start rapping you start looking at every song like how would he approach and it just ends up coming out like that. But the voice thing is all me the flow is all me rhymes, punchlines, etc. all me not imitation its just the way i think he would approach it and i make it my own. Only thing i could see helping is completely breaking away from listenin to wayne. But if all i did was listen to kanye future and ti i would sound like them too cause all those people are my fav artist besides wayne.
              I Remember everything...JUSS KNOW
              FERINA OMO or Die

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              • #19
                Originally posted by tmillzy View Post
                Probably the best feedback i have ever gotten. What people dont understand that after you listen to fav artist for so long and once you start rapping you start looking at every song like how would he approach and it just ends up coming out like that. But the voice thing is all me the flow is all me rhymes, punchlines, etc. all me not imitation its just the way i think he would approach it and i make it my own. Only thing i could see helping is completely breaking away from listenin to wayne. But if all i did was listen to kanye future and ti i would sound like them too cause all those people are my fav artist besides wayne.
                I disagree with that. I'd assume most of the guys around here listen to Wayne and have for awhile, but don't get the same comparisons. But anyway...

                I really like this beat, you rode the shit out of it. I'm a fan of your music, regardless of what other people think.

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                • #20
                  Originally posted by MC_Crary View Post
                  I disagree with that. I'd assume most of the guys around here listen to Wayne and have for awhile, but don't get the same comparisons. But anyway...

                  I really like this beat, you rode the shit out of it. I'm a fan of your music, regardless of what other people think.
                  Thanks bro
                  I Remember everything...JUSS KNOW
                  FERINA OMO or Die

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                  • #21
                    Damn dude, shyte sound good, beat is tight, lyrics are really good 4/5 i don't know if you meant to sound like lil wayne but remember some people don't like 2 of the same.
                    Last edited by MrFums; 04-16-2013, 11:25 PM.

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                    • #22
                      You sound like wayne...

                      Just messin' witcha. Ever notice how your adlibs even sound like waynes? I can hear hints of your regular voice in this. It leaks out on some tracks you do. Even the laugh is wayne-like. I think that's why people make that statement about your music. Especially in verse two, you should more like "Kash" than wayne, but you relapse here and there back into the wayne motiff.

                      As far as the song goes, its very well crafted. Good delivery, flow, lyrics are on point for the concept and the beat is great. All elements of what constitutes "good music" are there, at least in my book. In the future, I'd like to see you experiment more with different beats and different flows. I think you have a fountain of personality and capability as a rapper, but you're limiting yourself. You got this kind of stuff in the bag. Go make a Kendrick Lamar or Kid Cudi style record.

                      Mykill's Verdict: 3.8/5

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                      • #23
                        Originally posted by mykill View Post
                        You sound like wayne...

                        Just messin' witcha. Ever notice how your adlibs even sound like waynes? I can hear hints of your regular voice in this. It leaks out on some tracks you do. Even the laugh is wayne-like. I think that's why people make that statement about your music. Especially in verse two, you should more like "Kash" than wayne, but you relapse here and there back into the wayne motiff.

                        As far as the song goes, its very well crafted. Good delivery, flow, lyrics are on point for the concept and the beat is great. All elements of what constitutes "good music" are there, at least in my book. In the future, I'd like to see you experiment more with different beats and different flows. I think you have a fountain of personality and capability as a rapper, but you're limiting yourself. You got this kind of stuff in the bag. Go make a Kendrick Lamar or Kid Cudi style record.

                        Mykill's Verdict: 3.8/5
                        Wait till you hear some of this other stuff i got its so different what yall been hearing from me. Also this song was recorded last year man. Most of the stuff on here is last year from me. Just wait new stuff coming soon!
                        I Remember everything...JUSS KNOW
                        FERINA OMO or Die

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                        • #24
                          Kash aka Wayne killed it lol Im stealin dat "where u Been at" line

                          5/5 send me dis song
                          PURP 7 OUT NOW!!!!
                          http://www.datpiff.com/Famou-Bueller...pe.568870.html

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