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  • Kailez - Bad Girl (Prod.Kailez) #LiveFromTheVault Week 3

    #LiveFromTheVault Week 3

    Sorry for the delay I've been away from home with my newborn son. But anyway here's week 3 #LiveFromTheVault Follow me on twitter @Kailez93



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    Congrats on the son, bruh.

    When you say, "Imma throw ones..." you kinda sound like nelly to me, lol. I kinda feel like this was a throwaway, though. This had a lot more potential (story wise, I guess. Just felt like you could've added more onto the bad girl thing. you alluded to it at the beginning, but you dropped it later in the verse) and I thought a second verse would've came on and shit. but this isn't bad, but it's not super amazing. The chorus was pretty nice, though. The end dragged on. You have a dope delivery, too. I could fuck with this if the end was shorter. I just listened to Good Girl, was that the intro to this song? If they are related, disregard the previous shit I said.

    3.8/5 (4/5 if related)
    Last edited by ATLien666; 04-11-2013, 05:52 AM.


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    • #3
      Originally posted by ATLien666 View Post
      Congrats on the son, bruh.

      When you say, "Imma throw ones..." you kinda sound like nelly to me, lol. I kinda feel like this was a throwaway, though. This had a lot more potential (story wise, I guess. Just felt like you could've added more onto the bad girl thing. you alluded to it at the beginning, but you dropped it later in the verse) and I thought a second verse would've came on and shit. but this isn't bad, but it's not super amazing. The chorus was pretty nice, though. The end dragged on. You have a dope delivery, too. I could fuck with this if the end was shorter. I just listened to Good Girl, was that the intro to this song? If they are related, disregard the previous shit I said.

      3.8/5 (4/5 if related)
      Thanks fam! and yeah Good Girl is the track before this on the EP. This track was created different than usual I was talking to a friend who has connections to get me performances at this local strip club and he told me If i had a song for the strip club it would be perfect. So I made this but i never got that performance so fuck it lol
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      • #4
        Dope radio type hook/beat, verses were cool too. I like the autotune parts alot.


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        • #5
          Originally posted by KingEz514 View Post
          Dope radio type hook/beat, verses were cool too. I like the autotune parts alot.
          Thanks for the feedback bro
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          • #6
            Nice flow! 3.5/5
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            • #7
              Originally posted by Flame Beats View Post
              Nice flow! 3.5/5
              Thanks bruh
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              • #8
                This is much better than that other but not really feeling this one either. I'm sure I have songs people don't reallylike also, it's just about a preference. Congratulations on your son.

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by MC_Crary View Post
                  This is much better than that other but not really feeling this one either. I'm sure I have songs people don't reallylike also, it's just about a preference. Congratulations on your son.
                  thanks bro
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