Rembrandt - Lullabies of the Lost (Red Pill)

[ATLien666]

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I stayed in Wonderland for a few. Don't know if you guys will fuck with this, but I've been making swag rap for a while now, so had to return to norm.

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[tmillzy]

weird ass song lol but i kinda fucks with it
4/5

[mykill]

Download Lullabies of the Lost (Red Pill).mp3 | Limelinx

I stayed in Wonderland for a few. Don't know if you guys will fuck with this, but I've been making swag rap for a while now, so had to return to norm.

feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-week-3-a.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...check-out.html

Adding this to the Monster playlist.... We need to finish that track and get that thing completed...

Isnt that a Nujabes sample?

[ATLien666]

weird ass song lol but i kinda fucks with it
4/5

'preciate it, bruh.

Adding this to the Monster playlist.... We need to finish that track and get that thing completed...

Isnt that a Nujabes sample?

For sure. I'm spending this weekend recording. I'mma drop one more song, finish up our song and 2/3 more I got and drop the tape.

yeah, it is. Nujabes and Minmi.

[MC_Crary]

What an interesting opening. The begging with the sample switching up to find the perfect level would've been great if the sample had've stayed the same lol. Dope verse but you need to put one more on this before you drop the tape. That would make up for making us sitting through the beginning lol. Real shit though man, you're one of the most creative artist around here. Can't wait for Monster bro.

[ATLien666]

What an interesting opening. The begging with the sample switching up to find the perfect level would've been great if the sample had've stayed the same lol. Dope verse but you need to put one more on this before you drop the tape. That would make up for making us sitting through the beginning lol. Real shit though man, you're one of the most creative artist around here. Can't wait for Monster bro.

It's the same sample, the pitch makes it sound different, though. never mind, I think I know what you're talking about now. I was gonna stick with the first instrumental, but it's insanely fast and the chorus is the only good part about it, tbh. and that's a good idea, I'mma add another verse to it. and I appreciate it, bruh. Shit means a lot. Hopefully the tape doesn't disappoint.

[Flame Beats]

Trippy opening to the song and pretty dope verse. 4/5

[TupacShaquer]

I deff fuck with your creativity. The begin was creative but I personally don't like it. I felt like maybe the transitions could have flowed together better idk.

When the beat drops , you did pretty good. Your flow has deff improved since last time , and in each song I feel like you're slowly perfecting it. The only problem I have , is your lyrics. Seems to basic nah mean ? Like I feel like with this beat you should complex it a little more . It wasn't bad, just could have been better.
Was that ending you? I liked that finish a lot.

Overall 3/5

[ATLien666]

Trippy opening to the song and pretty dope verse. 4/5

'preciate it, 'preciate it.

I deff fuck with your creativity. The begin was creative but I personally don't like it. I felt like maybe the transitions could have flowed together better idk.

When the beat drops , you did pretty good. Your flow has deff improved since last time , and in each song I feel like you're slowly perfecting it. The only problem I have , is your lyrics. Seems to basic nah mean ? Like I feel like with this beat you should complex it a little more . It wasn't bad, just could have been better.
Was that ending you? I liked that finish a lot.

Overall 3/5

Any lines in particular that sounded basic to you?

[JSmooth]

it was def creative and whether or not people feel it at least its original. verse was solid and i think it may be a song that grows on you over time.