Jay Bell - Easy

[KingEz514]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rloCmrIG-Qw

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Please check it out and give feedback.


Feedback 1: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tclub-flo.html
Feedback 2: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-week-3-a.html

[mykill]

I listened to this because you followed the rules...

Mixing is really good on this, but its just another Chief Keef -esque song. I'm tired of these. You seem like you have some good bars and what not, but get out of that Chief Keef style and make good music. Did you mix this yourself? Great quality track though. You guys sleepin' need to wake up.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.6/5

[KingEz514]

I listened to this because you followed the rules...

Mixing is really good on this, but its just another Chief Keef -esque song. I'm tired of these. You seem like you have some good bars and what not, but get out of that Chief Keef style and make good music. Did you mix this yourself? Great quality track though. You guys sleepin' need to wake up.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.6/5

Thanks for the feedback. I mixed it myself and yeah I know what you mean, not all of my songs are like this tho'. Thanks alot tho'.

[KingEz514]

Lol wow, anybody else?

[ATLien666]

You really don't have the voice/delivery for the chorus, tbh. Some of these lines are headshakers, too. Especially the www one. That shit was too forced. I like this shit, though. Good mastering. Nice flow and some good lines. The transition from the first verse to the chorus was kinda weird; maybe because it was insanely smooth, idk. The worst part of this was the chorus, honestly. If you would've had somebody else do it, this would've been dope.

3.8/5

[KingEz514]

You really don't have the voice/delivery for the chorus, tbh. Some of these lines are headshakers, too. Especially the www one. That shit was too forced. I like this shit, though. Good mastering. Nice flow and some good lines. The transition from the first verse to the chorus was kinda weird; maybe because it was insanely smooth, idk. The worst part of this was the chorus, honestly. If you would've had somebody else do it, this would've been dope.

3.8/5

Thanks alot man, appriciate it alot and I will def. look into some of the shit you commented on.

[tmillzy]

Damn i did a song to this beat like almost two months ago lol. But yeah like everyone else said the hook is the problem and mixing is gr8 man keep going. 3.6/5

[KingEz514]

Damn i did a song to this beat like almost two months ago lol. But yeah like everyone else said the hook is the problem and mixing is gr8 man keep going. 3.6/5

Lol wow, this was labeled as Trigger Finger (Instrumental) by Lil Wayne when I found it actually, can I hear your song? And thanks alot for the feedback I appriciate it.

[tmillzy]

Lol wow, this was labeled as Trigger Finger (Instrumental) by Lil Wayne when I found it actually, can I hear your song? And thanks alot for the feedback I appriciate it.

thats the same way i found it lol and yeah whats your email

[KingEz514]

thats the same way i found it lol and yeah whats your email

jaybell514@gmail.com

[JSmooth]

mixing was there and I could vibe to it. It def sounds like a chief keef song but ive never heard any of ur other songs so they may be different

lyrics: 3.5/5
flow: 4/5 not a great flow in general but for this song u did a good job
overall: 3.8/5
keep grindin homie

[Gibbsy]

The beat is fire!! love the intro , and how it drops, I like the laid back flow and the delivery is spot on, lyrically its dope
deffo going to be checking out the rest of your music 5/5