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[TupacShaquer]

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[MC_Crary]

Right off the bat man, the sax on this is so smooth man. Your delivery on this could've been smoother to compliment the beat. The way you write reminds of some great writer. Really amazing guy, myself lol. I mean it. I think the way the words come out are similar. I'm not saying you're biting or anything like that, just interesting. Great minds think alike. You spit from the heart. All of your verses sound like your straight up thoughts laid on wax, as it should. Just gotta continue working on that delivery. It takes time but you're coming along. As is your artistry. The way the you're putting together these tracks, it's time for you to drop an album. At least a mix tape.

[TupacShaquer]

Right off the bat man, the sax on this is so smooth man. Your delivery on this could've been smoother to compliment the beat. The way you write reminds of some great writer. Really amazing guy, myself lol. I mean it. I think the way the words come out are similar. I'm not saying you're biting or anything like that, just interesting. Great minds think alike. You spit from the heart. All of your verses sound like your straight up thoughts laid on wax, as it should. Just gotta continue working on that delivery. It takes time but you're coming along. As is your artistry. The way the you're putting together these tracks, it's time for you to drop an album. At least a mix tape.

Haha now you got me curious as to who.
When I wrote this , I got into like im talking to a therapist type mood idk
And like I would tell him how all these people manage to stay , but how come my mom couldnt.

Like in my first verse i ended " Look at my town (Medellin , Colombia) , where the pay is all the way down, but shit, they still stay"

My second verse I talk about all the hate I get hence "I know what its like to grow in south floridas hate" and I also talk about not leaving even if i were to get a record deal (im not taking this serious , but just wanted to add to the theme of the song)"no shame unless this record deal is to late, next year i graduate, but imma stay"

To lazy to explain the rest, you can try and figure it out on your own

[ATLien666]

So close. Your delivery/flow is still ruining your songs. Lyrically, you've always been good, but it seems like you have a stream of consciousness style of writing; like Crary said, it seems like it's straight from your brain to the pad, which works, but there's artistic flair to it. My worry is that your songs will fall into the underground territory where you'll make lyrical songs, but not sonically good ones. Sentus had the same problem for a while, but his songs became more listenable without sacrificing lyrical skills.

3.8/5

[Gibbsy]

fucking dope man, just the sort of vibe I love, the beat is perfect, the vocal sample on the beat isn't great imo,
but the sax is dope, your delivery is one of the best ive heard from you, you starting to sound like you've found your vibe,
lyrics are tight man, nice work cant really say anything bad besides quality seems a lil weak but that's all 4.5/5 man nice work

[Cli-City]

Haha...This is dope...you improved alot over the past year...your flow is still choppy in a lot of areas but its way better than what it used to be..sound quality is lacking...Lyrics are good..you were always a good story teller...the sax though>>>