(Fums Ent) Quick Free Ticket to hell

[MrFums]

https://soundcloud.com/fument/yungbo...ck-free-ticket

About the song: This song was written by YoungBone, mixed by Mr Fum's It a laid back song made in Fl studio, We do not have a studio, we record out of a hot ass shed with a computer mic, ipod mic, and mix in fl studio, in a town name Clewiston, FL. Our group name is Fum's Entertainment.



http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-one-up-2.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...new-beats.html

[TupacShaquer]

You have to give feed to 2 other people then post the links in here.

BTW you live like an hour and a half from me

[MrFums]

You have to give feed to 2 other people then post the links in here.

BTW you live like an hour and a half from me

alright, yea u stay in miami or orlando?

[TupacShaquer]

alright, yea u stay in miami or orlando?

Ft Lauderdale

[MrFums]

that not far like 45min

[mykill]

Yungbone needs to project better. Check the mixing you're doing too, he sounds like he's in a hole and makes it hard for me to understand what he's saying sometimes. Delay effects are perfect though. Flow seems decent though. Sounds kinda monotone though, you try more inflection on some of the lines. Did you guys make the beat as well? Can't understand most of the first few lines when Mr Fums comes in. I like the energy, but work on the lyrics. Trippy vibe to the track and decent overall.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.3/5

[MrFums]

Yungbone needs to project better. Check the mixing you're doing too, he sounds like he's in a hole and makes it hard for me to understand what he's saying sometimes. Delay effects are perfect though. Flow seems decent though. Sounds kinda monotone though, you try more inflection on some of the lines. Did you guys make the beat as well? Can't understand most of the first few lines when Mr Fums comes in. I like the energy, but work on the lyrics. Trippy vibe to the track and decent overall.

Mykill's Verdict: 3.3/5

yea we young bone made this beat, we both make beats thanks i'll talk to him about taking off the delay so he can early be heard, it suppose to be a laid back song just to chill to thx for the feed

[mykill]

yea we young bone made this beat, we both make beats thanks i'll talk to him about taking off the delay so he can early be heard, it suppose to be a laid back song just to chill to thx for the feed

Nah the delay is fine, just the vocals dont pop. You put them to an EQ and a Compressor? You're not premixing em when you record? That distorts things. The delay effect sounds fine.

[MrFums]

Nah the delay is fine, just the vocals dont pop. You put them to an EQ and a Compressor? You're not premixing em when you record? That distorts things. The delay effect sounds fine.

nah we have a shitty as computer mic, we reord out of a shed

[mykill]

lol, your next step to improve your music is to get a good mic. Sheds work, you just need that clarity and crispness of a good mic. about $100 range. that'll take your music up to the next level

[MrFums]

lol, your next step to improve your music is to get a good mic. Sheds work, you just need that clarity and crispness of a good mic. about $100 range. that'll take your music up to the next level

ight thx gotta start somewhere thou

[ATLien666]

This probably would've been a banger with the right equipment. Sounds like a KLVN track, though. Ya'll niggas need to pool some money together and invest in a mic. Doesn't even have to be an expensive one. Just something better than this because this is nigh unlistenable.