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    http://usershare.net/dwmj1lbik3rk

    YMC-1st and 2nd verses
    Hilight-3 verse


    feedback

    btw YME this is the recording of my freestyle i posted in here.
    take a listen, since you dont read freestyles

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    Re: Am I Dreamin'-YMC & Hilight

    Was overall pretty good.

    YMC- Try to be more enthusiastic. You weren't that choppy so good job on that. Also thanks for the shout out.

    Hilight - You were a little over the place in my opinion as far as flow goes. *I guess I've been corrected.

    Not bad, but can improve easily (Both of you)
    “Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.

    -Adam Smith, Theory of Moral Sentiments

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      Re: Am I Dreamin'-YMC & Hilight

      well listen to the hook. it fitted. i didn hear his verses till after it was all said and done

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        Re: Am I Dreamin'-YMC & Hilight

        Originally posted by HiLight
        well listen to the hook. it fitted. i didn hear his verses till after it was all said and done
        HiLight, dont trip man. Your verse actually fit the song, and you wrote new lyrics for it. Instead of some already post lyrics. Your flow wasnt good, but neither of yalls was. Production on it was also pretty bad. HiLigh, start sending me your acapellas. Ill have em sounding alot better.

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          Re: Am I Dreamin'-YMC & Hilight

          aight bruh thanks ima keep workin on my flow and all that so expect improvement from me within this next month everyone.

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          • #6
            Re: Am I Dreamin'-YMC & Hilight

            I edited my post for you.
            “Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.

            -Adam Smith, Theory of Moral Sentiments

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            • #7
              Re: Am I Dreamin'-YMC & Hilight

              Originally posted by HiLight
              aight bruh thanks ima keep workin on my flow and all that so expect improvement from me within this next month everyone.
              Yeah I hope my advice helped.

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              • #8
                Re: Am I Dreamin'-YMC & Hilight

                nd i didnt mean it to be hostile in anyway, just stickin up for my self ya digg?

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                • #9
                  Re: Am I Dreamin'-YMC & Hilight

                  I know, I don't catch everything all the time.
                  “Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.

                  -Adam Smith, Theory of Moral Sentiments

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                  • #10
                    Re: Am I Dreamin'-YMC & Hilight

                    i think its pretty good. i'll dl it and put it in my HQ studio playlist. i like to have what ppl post on my ipod. but keep it up
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                    Props to Woocky

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