J-Smooth- My Circumstances

[JSmooth]

haven't dropped a track in a minute so here ya go



My Circumstances - 11 My Circumstances.mp3


feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ml#post1086965
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[MC_Crary]

Like the hook. Well written. Strings on this beat are dope. The part where you let it breath was perfect cause this beat is almost worth having just as an instrumental. I honestly expected more from the lyrics. Like the first verse is kinda redundant to most rap verses you know. I think you have a good concept here, just could've been executed better.

[ATLien666]

but I fucks with this a lot. you seem to have your style, flow and delivery perfected. You're making really listenable songs while still balancing lyricism. Not saying this was super complex, because the concept and everything has been done to death, but nobody cares about unoriginality if it's dope.

but to be honest, I really can't complain about this. "Truth is, I don't need her, but I don't wanna be alone." This shit is dope. Definitely something I can really listen to.

5/5

[mykill]

The hook flows well in and out of the verses. Very smooth track.

[tmillzy]

Idk why but you remind of old Drake and some one else. Dope azz song though. The backgroun vocals should be turned up a tab. Flow is on point . Overall its a dope chill track man.
Ill give it 5/5 bro.

[KidComet]

All yo songs are on a pro, mainstream direction,
Your good, no lie man, keep pushing you already got the music spark up in u, best adive i can give is do you and keep going

[JSmooth]

but I fucks with this a lot. you seem to have your style, flow and delivery perfected. You're making really listenable songs while still balancing lyricism. Not saying this was super complex, because the concept and everything has been done to death, but nobody cares about unoriginality if it's dope.

but to be honest, I really can't complain about this. "Truth is, I don't need her, but I don't wanna be alone." This shit is dope. Definitely something I can really listen to.

5/5

Thanks bro! yea with the project this song is on I wanted to try and find that balance

Idk why but you remind of old Drake and some one else. Dope azz song though. The backgroun vocals should be turned up a tab. Flow is on point . Overall its a dope chill track man.
Ill give it 5/5 bro.

I appreciate bruh and yea that drake comparison has come up a few times ha

All yo songs are on a pro, mainstream direction,
Your good, no lie man, keep pushing you already got the music spark up in u, best adive i can give is do you and keep going

mainstream was really the focus of this whole project and I think thats gonna help bring some new fans and a chance for some radio plays