MC_CRARY - Blessings

[Artille]

That's what's up man. Can't wait till you can get back to work. Always one of my favorite lyricist around here.

Btw, that Money adlib was my take on Meek Millz adlibs lol.

I appreciate that man.

and I wouldn't have ever known that had you not told me. I don't listen to Meek at all... nor anyone from MMG for that matter.

[mykill]

There's a lot of good elements to this song. There's also some stuff that needs work.

The concept is solid and the performance of it is great. I think you need to bring more energy into this, for what it is. The faith and religion motif persists through the whole track. The "Money" adlib however sounds awkward and creates a jarring moment when you listen. I would add a little more delay to it so it has some slight echo to it. When mixing your vocals, be it a verse or a hook, make sure you adjust the volume levels. When you have your adlib and your verse at the same volume, it makes contrasting sounds that collide with each other and doesnt accentuate the vocals. I typically make my adlibs less than 50% of the base volume, depending on the track and sound I'm trying to get.

Notable Quotables:
"...Thank god for the semen, thank god for the egg, thank god for the demons in my mu'fuckin' head"
"...I'm runnin' for my life, with the devil on my tail"
"...givin' lucifer the bidness is the shit that I've been on!"

The way you ended this is great. See what you can do with volume levels and such to fade the instrumental end instead of it ending abruptly. Take note people. This is how you make a "RECORD" as opposed to just making a "SONG".

Mykill's Verdict: 4.2/5

[MC_Crary]

There's a lot of good elements to this song. There's also some stuff that needs work.

The concept is solid and the performance of it is great. I think you need to bring more energy into this, for what it is. The faith and religion motif persists through the whole track. The "Money" adlib however sounds awkward and creates a jarring moment when you listen. I would add a little more delay to it so it has some slight echo to it. When mixing your vocals, be it a verse or a hook, make sure you adjust the volume levels. When you have your adlib and your verse at the same volume, it makes contrasting sounds that collide with each other and doesnt accentuate the vocals. I typically make my adlibs less than 50% of the base volume, depending on the track and sound I'm trying to get.

Notable Quotables:
"...Thank god for the semen, thank god for the egg, thank god for the demons in my mu'fuckin' head"
"...I'm runnin' for my life, with the devil on my tail"
"...givin' lucifer the bidness is the shit that I've been on!"

The way you ended this is great. See what you can do with volume levels and such to fade the instrumental end instead of it ending abruptly. Take note people. This is how you make a "RECORD" as opposed to just making a "SONG".

Mykill's Verdict: 4.2/5

Great feed man. Been wondering when you'd comment lol. Much appreciated bro.

[mykill]

Great feed man. Been wondering when you'd comment lol. Much appreciated bro.

yeah i already listened to this when you posted it on your Facebook. thought i'd give you some more fed here though

[KidComet]

-Great track man, I like what your talking about mos def, Always intresting to hear different perspectives about spirituality and life

I think your flow and delivery could be improved a little, ur voice sound alot better,
everyone got there own sound just gotta find yours

[THA GR8 M8]

this that shit.

[Laudacity93]

I digg this bro for some reason this reminds me of 8ball execpt that meek mill adlib lol 4/5

[mykill]

See, that's when you know you've made a RECORD as opposed to just a SONG. This is the kinda track that sticks with a person. I'm working on random other stuff in my house and all of sudden the chorus pops in my head. I love tracks that stick with you like that. SONGS might can go plat as singles, but RECORDS build careers. Great job MAC. MMG > everything

[Laudacity93]

See, that's when you know you've made a RECORD as opposed to just a SONG. This is the kinda track that sticks with a person. I'm working on random other stuff in my house and all of sudden the chorus pops in my head. I love tracks that stick with you like that. SONGS might can go plat as singles, but RECORDS build careers. Great job MAC. MMG > everything

true. I still catch myself rapping that hook from dope dick tbh.

[MC_Crary]

Y'all got a nigga feelin' special lol.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

hahaha my nigga this your best track! good shit love the charisma fools!

[TupacShaquer]

You rode this beat to clean mann. To lazy to give feed, but we deff gotta work on some shit.