Preview of the first solo track I've done

[jrnickz]

This is just a rough draft. i gotta get my boy myk to master it plus i have some revisions to the verse and a new way to record that allows me to be loud enough without cracking and clipping. second verse is even going to come harder. hope u guys enjoy



http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...lowing-me.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...blessings.html

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

love the sample? who produced this shit? killer as lyrics if myk do his thing you should have a quality track. add some adlibs

[mykill]

How come people are sleepin' on this?

IS THIS WHAT YOU WANT!? NEW JR NICKZ!?

lol, yall need to pay attention

[Cli-City]

Hip Hop Pt 2. Did you ever finish this? And if not you need to ASAP

[jrnickz]

Hip Hop Pt 2. Did you ever finish this? And if not you need to ASAP

I got the second verse done already and it gave me a lot of time to speak on the subject a lot more time than the first verse gave me and and I believe it trumps the first verse by far and it's going to be nothing short of a classic as well as the track we did together. The first verse has a few revised bars that makes it sound beetter as well.

P.s. Check that murder beats track. Idk y so many ppl slept on it

[ilovemusic23]

whack wtf....

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

ehhh, a pussy song about a bitch that left and cheated on your little dick ass.\
grow some balls bruh. grow some ovaries.

[jrnickz]

ehhh, a pussy song about a bitch that left and cheated on your little dick ass.\
grow some balls bruh. grow some ovaries.

U ignorant fuck. R u the only one that cant c that this Is a song about hiphop. Stop trolling n listen u fuckin fruit

[ProBitaz.]

Good track, loving the sample and overall beat. Lyrics are decent but I think you sounded too agressive and out of air on the mic.

But it's cool to hear some new stuff from you.

[jrnickz]

Good track, loving the sample and overall beat. Lyrics are decent but I think you sounded too agressive and out of air on the mic.

But it's cool to hear some new stuff from you.

Yeah me n my cuz talked about it and I probably need to take a more emotional approach cause the song is finished but like you said the aggression I came with doesn't match the subject very well. But wait to you get to hear the final mix. Second verse just goes in with those lyrics that the ppl are used to from me. I've branched to far away from my roots lately as u will hear from the next few songs released with me featured on it

[ProBitaz.]

Yeah me n my cuz talked about it and I probably need to take a more emotional approach cause the song is finished but like you said the aggression I came with doesn't match the subject very well. But wait to you get to hear the final mix. Second verse just goes in with those lyrics that the ppl are used to from me. I've branched to far away from my roots lately as u will hear from the next few songs released with me featured on it

great I can't wait to hear it!

[ATLien666]

mmmm, that Lana Del Rey sample. Is this the Joe Budden instrumental? I agree with the aggression, but it might also be because the vocals are too loud. if the vocals were quieter, you might be able to keep the aggression, but sounding a little more emotional might help too. idk, you could go either way, imo. I liked the first, but I was kinda expecting a little more. some dope ass double entendres or something, but I'mma keep an eye out for the full track.