End Of It - Lil Fuke

[lilwayneFAN6721]

Hey guys, this is the first solo track i recorded. Im most proud of the 3rd verse, so if you dont listen to the whole thing please give it a chance. Im 17 years old from Chicago.

"End Of It (CDQ).mp3" by cbeeb6721 - Hulkshare




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[mykill]

Chi-town, stand up!

I think you'll be better once you become more comfortable being on the mic. Track needs a hook to carry it. Beat is medicore. You might wanna shop around and find some better beats. Mixing volume is too high, you need to turn your vocals down a little. Not when you record, just when mastering it. Lyrics arent bad, you just gotta fine tune that flow some more. Listen to your first few takes of a verse some more, then go back in and record a better take. I think with some work, you'll be decent. Try to find some beats from Chicago producers to spit on. Gaggie and Deezy Beats are some... O'Bonjour as well....

Mykill's Verdict: 3.1/5