SM Maniac- Hit Em Up (Remix)

[TupacShaquer]

Not the Tupac one the Tyga one.

I love this beat and idc that this is a remake still sounds good af



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[mykill]

people gettin' lazy with the feedback linking... it's in the rules...

The thing that gets me about your songs, like this one for instance, is that your vocal mixing is always timid. I hear the lyrics and the lyrics are solid, its just the vocal mixing on this one is lower than the beat so your lyrics get lost in the song. All i can hear when I listen is the pianos from the beat. Maybe turn the beat volume down till you get it perfect. Fix that, and the lyrics will stand out more and to me make it a better track.

Mykill's Verdict: 3/5

[TupacShaquer]

people gettin' lazy with the feedback linking... it's in the rules...

The thing that gets me about your songs, like this one for instance, is that your vocal mixing is always timid. I hear the lyrics and the lyrics are solid, its just the vocal mixing on this one is lower than the beat so your lyrics get lost in the song. All i can hear when I listen is the pianos from the beat. Maybe turn the beat volume down till you get it perfect. Fix that, and the lyrics will stand out more and to me make it a better track.

Mykill's Verdict: 3/5

Reupped a better version and fixed feed

[__cas__]

If you mixed this better it could be a real dope remix. 4/5 try and mix it better because you definitely have bars on this.

[jrnickz]

for the most part you stayed on beat and rode this a lot better then your typical songs. Lyrics are there as always but i feel like you need to believe in what your saying more and it will come across as more confident and emotional. Thats all i feel this is really lacking is some confidence and emotion. other then that 3.5/5 keep practicing lil homie cause the progression is showing

[MC_Crary]

You just gotta work on that delivery man. Making the words fit the beat well enough to sound like you're just riding the beat. You've gotten so much better and the lyrics are there, you just gotta keep working. It's hard to understand a lot of things you're saying or trying to get acrross because of that delivery problem. Still so much better than before. Keep working homie.

[THA GR8 M8]

i agree with most of what crary said.. but let me add that i do think your flow got better and your at least on beat most of the time.. but the feel of it all is very weird, and not pleasing to listen to at times. your literally switching flows and tempos as often as every few words at times. so it just sounds all over the place. i also have a hard hearing what you are actually saying at times. like you're either not pronouncing things thoroughly or you're just transitioning into words in such a weird way that it all just sound grouped together. this could also be mixed down better btw. 3/5 but i see improvement brah.

[Tha Professor]

Gots to be mixed better, your raps could use some compression. I can hear that you got some cool lyrics but its not being presented to me to the fullest potential, work on that. I like the continuous rapping but honestly some words were not clear. I like the energy that u put into your words but as i said, something is not being presented correctly. I think its the way each word is articulated but i dunno. Not bad, keep up

2.9/5

[TupacShaquer]

for the most part you stayed on beat and rode this a lot better then your typical songs. Lyrics are there as always but i feel like you need to believe in what your saying more and it will come across as more confident and emotional. Thats all i feel this is really lacking is some confidence and emotion. other then that 3.5/5 keep practicing lil homie cause the progression is showing

Appreciate it .

You just gotta work on that delivery man. Making the words fit the beat well enough to sound like you're just riding the beat. You've gotten so much better and the lyrics are there, you just gotta keep working. It's hard to understand a lot of things you're saying or trying to get acrross because of that delivery problem. Still so much better than before. Keep working homie.

Thanks man , I swear I memorize my shit and try to get my delivery better but I guess it never comes out how I want it

i agree with most of what crary said.. but let me add that i do think your flow got better and your at least on beat most of the time.. but the feel of it all is very weird, and not pleasing to listen to at times. your literally switching flows and tempos as often as every few words at times. so it just sounds all over the place. i also have a hard hearing what you are actually saying at times. like you're either not pronouncing things thoroughly or you're just transitioning into words in such a weird way that it all just sound grouped together. this could also be mixed down better btw. 3/5 but i see improvement brah.

I feel you, as long as I'm improving I'm satisfied

Gots to be mixed better, your raps could use some compression. I can hear that you got some cool lyrics but its not being presented to me to the fullest potential, work on that. I like the continuous rapping but honestly some words were not clear. I like the energy that u put into your words but as i said, something is not being presented correctly. I think its the way each word is articulated but i dunno. Not bad, keep up

2.9/5

Thanks brah , I fucks with your feed heavy .

[Cli-City]

I think because its so hard to understand you sometimes...these types of beat dont really fit your voice...but that's just my opinion..dont really like this beat but with something like this beat you should've went harder..you're a more consicious rapper and that is where you shine in my opinion...

Your flow on this was great that....that greenier shit was wack though...lol.you knew that when you recorded...

the couple of bars with the leggins lines though were sick....

2/5....i see a big imporvemtn from when you started rapping...keep up the work homie

[Checkmatemuzick]

3/5 Only cause the mixing bruh get it mixed right and its a easy 4.5 cuz u were spazzing but its hard to understand certain parts cuz the beat drowns ur vocals but after seeing everybody comment saying the same thing I know you gon it have together by ur next post so ima say in tune and I just followed you on SoundCloud

[TupacShaquer]

3/5 Only cause the mixing bruh get it mixed right and its a easy 4.5 cuz u were spazzing but its hard to understand certain parts cuz the beat drowns ur vocals but after seeing everybody comment saying the same thing I know you gon it have together by ur next post so ima say in tune and I just followed you on SoundCloud

Thanks, I only really use soundcloud because it looks better on the forums lol , but I'll follow back