Phone Call -Lil Vince

[wayniac number1]

i dont know if we even have people listening to anything besides hip hop on this site, but yeah heres my attempt at a electro beat
feedback is appreciated as always







feedback: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ml#post1106726
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...785-beats.html

[mykill]

You got the bass line perfect at least, lol. I'm not the biggest techno/electronica fan but this is solid. Reverb on the synth is solid as well. Like the change in notes and the gradual progression. Keep working on this one. Need like some strings to carry this more maybe...

Mykill's Verdict: 3.6/5

[MC_Crary]

I'm no expert but I dabble a bit in edm. Needs amajor drops where your bass is hitting harder. More bass is needed in this anyway but especially on some much needed drops. You've got a solid start here, just needs to be completed.

[wayniac number1]

You got the bass line perfect at least, lol. I'm not the biggest techno/electronica fan but this is solid. Reverb on the synth is solid as well. Like the change in notes and the gradual progression. Keep working on this one. Need like some strings to carry this more maybe...

Mykill's Verdict: 3.6/5

yeah, just wanted to try something different , but thanks

I'm no expert but I dabble a bit in edm. Needs amajor drops where your bass is hitting harder. More bass is needed in this anyway but especially on some much needed drops. You've got a solid start here, just needs to be completed.

you got it right, the bass is what i tried to change too, but it was always overpowered with a hard hitting bass soyou couldnt hear the synth properly :/
thanks though