Need help, trying to make a rap song.. i am a noob!

[LilWayneNorwayLove]

Hi i want to try make a rap song about a girl who i rly liked, but we are just good friends. i don't want to change that, but i want to tell her that i rly like her, and how much she has ment to me. i had a crush on her, and i also want to tell abut it.

I am from norway, so i don't speak Engelish that well, but i want to mak it in engelish anyway. I can't sing, and i have no rhythm so my song is never going to be any good, but that is not so important. (altho i want it to be as good as possible)

Here is the thing, i have tried to make a verse, but rly it was trash. i tried to make easy rimes, but it just sounded stupid. one of my problems is that i don't know how to make the beat, or the chorus. i tried to listen to some beats, but i found it rly hard to try and make a verse to the beat...

So what i want U to do is give me some help, tell me how to make or find a beat, and a chorus. and tell me how the hell i make a rap song, cuz i have no idea...

[WeezyFan]

are you a troll

[LilWayneNorwayLove]

Not rly a troll, just Stupid. but rly i want to try this

I think i posted it at the wrong part of the forum tho...

[J.M.I]

Not rly a troll, just Stupid. but rly i want to try this

I think i posted it at the wrong part of the forum tho...

Switch on tha autotune and sing "You Da Shit" or "Prostitute2" to her and youl be in her pants lol

[TupacShaquer]

Make a cover to Lil Waynes verse on crying out for me

[YMCMB357]

[MENTION=4348]lilweezyfan[/MENTION] can help you, he just murdered the Karate Chop beat =)

[TheePuppy]

(verse 1)
Weed louder than a gun sound
Smell that money like a blood hound
Ak chop em down
Silencer on the pistol dont make a sound
Bout to put rims on my skateboard wheels
Beat that pussy up like emmitt till
Up and comin like Logic
Sittin back smokin to the Chronic
These rappers say they real but they fake like drake, its ironic
I get these raps out so fast you could call it supersonic
Yeah...
(Verse 2)
Im high as fuck like Tune
bout to be the first black man on the Moon
Before i come back i might stop a Jupiter
I spit this fire you can call it Luscifer

[TinyPenisProductions]

Hi i want to try make a rap song about a girl who i rly liked, but we are just good friends. i don't want to change that, but i want to tell her that i rly like her, and how much she has ment to me. i had a crush on her, and i also want to tell abut it.

I am from norway, so i don't speak Engelish that well, but i want to mak it in engelish anyway. I can't sing, and i have no rhythm so my song is never going to be any good, but that is not so important. (altho i want it to be as good as possible)

Here is the thing, i have tried to make a verse, but rly it was trash. i tried to make easy rimes, but it just sounded stupid. one of my problems is that i don't know how to make the beat, or the chorus. i tried to listen to some beats, but i found it rly hard to try and make a verse to the beat...

So what i want U to do is give me some help, tell me how to make or find a beat, and a chorus. and tell me how the hell i make a rap song, cuz i have no idea...

Just say what comes to your heart: for instance i would say

penis smaller than a tic tac
haha you can tell i aint black
choke my bitch with a rainbow flag
that i stole from a homeless fag

[lilweezyfan]

just give her alotta birdcalls

[josteinv]

Hello, i am from Norway too, I made a song like this actuly. But it was more like i told her in the song that im afraid that she dont like me back. Maybe you get some inspiration from it. Listen to it here: http://www55.zippyshare.com/v/67077428/file.html

[LilWayneNorwayLove]

Hi, this is what i have... 1 verse

-I'v thought about u evry day of this werry year/
I hope u are OK, cuz i rly care/
Can't hold my feelings inn, my love is to grate/
Your flawless skin, saw away to late/
-Got blinded by beauty, walked with love inn my eyes/
U were an angel, Pray for u every night/
See the roman candle, not a daily sight/
U got that thai booty, can't stare above we'r only guys/
-Your brown eyes, shining like stars/
My crown dies, combining my bars/
Your smile like the sun, brighten up my day/
I have not won, hope u see me throught this musical phrase/
-When your scared, i want to remove your tears/
I am not prepared, it's harder than the great war affaires/
Hate to see u in pain, can't think about anything els/
Like standing inn the rain, try to stay safe but can't find any ways/

and do remember i'm form norway so finding rhymes is rly hard for me... what do u think?

[BlakeJay]

Hi, this is what i have... 1 verse

-I'v thought about u evry day of this werry year/
I hope u are OK, cuz i rly care/
Can't hold my feelings inn, my love is to grate/
Your flawless skin, saw away to late/
-Got blinded by beauty, walked with love inn my eyes/
U were an angel, Pray for u every night/
See the roman candle, not a daily sight/
U got that thai booty, can't stare above we'r only guys/
-Your brown eyes, shining like stars/
My crown dies, combining my bars/
Your smile like the sun, brighten up my day/
I have not won, hope u see me throught this musical phrase/
-When your scared, i want to remove your tears/
I am not prepared, it's harder than the great war affaires/
Hate to see u in pain, can't think about anything els/
Like standing inn the rain, try to stay safe but can't find any ways/

and do remember i'm form norway so finding rhymes is rly hard for me... what do u think?

This isnt as bad as you said it would be..only part I'd change is the part I bolded, just seemed out of place and didn't fit the rest of the rap..but other than that I'm sure she'd enjoy it


If you find it hard to stay on beat or find a good beat you can do it as a poem rather than a rap..with a poem you dont really have to follow and rhythm or beat so it should be easier..good luck cuzo I hope it all works out for ya