This is just brain storming, i did on the buss.
I see u every day, i see u on the train, i see your shiny hear like rain.
I think abut u every day, i can never see an other way, got my eays locked on'ya beautiful face.
I wish that one day, i could stop pray, pray that one day or the next day, Pray i'm in your eays, like even in your mind.
I wish i was a thought, and that thought would make u smile, not just with your mouth, even with your eays.
I wish that that day, is not to far away, i don't sit to far away, were hadding the same way.
U always locked out, U never turned around, i could se reflection of your eays.. they shined.
U are a dimond but u are priceles, cuz your shining brigthest, dam... i wish i could by this.
I hope i am your friend, not just ignorant, i hope i'm not insane, thinking i could be your man, and stil your best friend and your best man. (this was not suposed to end like this, but i cant figure how to continue it)
Hi i want to make a rap song about a girl, as u see i am not very good. I have no rhythm, and i can't sing. I started my brainstorm thinking it would be easy, the everything went bad... like rly "I wish that that day, is not to far away, i don't sit to far away, were hadding the same way." this together with almost every other line did not make any sence.
i tried to make easy rymes, but it just sounded stupid. one of my problems is that i don't know how to make the beat, or the chorus. i tried to listen to some beats, but i found it rly hard to try and make a verse to the beat...
So what i want U to do is give me some help, tell me how to make or find a beat, and a chorus. and tell me how the hell i make a rap verse, cuz i have no idea...
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Wow i read what i just posted, it sounded so stupid... i rly hope someone can show me how to do this thing !
I see u every day, i see u on the train, i see your shiny hear like rain.
I think abut u every day, i can never see an other way, got my eays locked on'ya beautiful face.
I wish that one day, i could stop pray, pray that one day or the next day, Pray i'm in your eays, like even in your mind.
I wish i was a thought, and that thought would make u smile, not just with your mouth, even with your eays.
I wish that that day, is not to far away, i don't sit to far away, were hadding the same way.
U always locked out, U never turned around, i could se reflection of your eays.. they shined.
U are a dimond but u are priceles, cuz your shining brigthest, dam... i wish i could by this.
I hope i am your friend, not just ignorant, i hope i'm not insane, thinking i could be your man, and stil your best friend and your best man. (this was not suposed to end like this, but i cant figure how to continue it)
Hi i want to make a rap song about a girl, as u see i am not very good. I have no rhythm, and i can't sing. I started my brainstorm thinking it would be easy, the everything went bad... like rly "I wish that that day, is not to far away, i don't sit to far away, were hadding the same way." this together with almost every other line did not make any sence.
i tried to make easy rymes, but it just sounded stupid. one of my problems is that i don't know how to make the beat, or the chorus. i tried to listen to some beats, but i found it rly hard to try and make a verse to the beat...
So what i want U to do is give me some help, tell me how to make or find a beat, and a chorus. and tell me how the hell i make a rap verse, cuz i have no idea...
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Wow i read what i just posted, it sounded so stupid... i rly hope someone can show me how to do this thing !
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