Jr Nickz "Tell em Something" Ft. O Da EmCee

[jrnickz]

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-thursday.html

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...weak-hand.html

[MC_Crary]

We gotta sit down and work on that mixing together bro. I'm willing to put in how ever much time we need to. You guys put together a great one here but the quality we'll take away from it. The sound is off putting, listeners will miss out just because their ears are disgruntled by the sound of the vocals. You've got a good mic, we just gotta work on the overall audio quality. Next lyrics from both of you guys were great. The hook set the pace and you murked the concept. O brought that heat. I like the flow you used Nickz. You've gotten so comfortable on the mic. "Name a motherfucker rappin' deeper than I". Sickening lyrics man. The verse goes right into the hook though. The mixing has to be different. Even slightly, it has to differentiate for the listener. Honestly when it comes to certain aspects of a song you have to dumb it down. Give the listener hints that parts are different cause honestly most people don't have a clue about song structure. They just want a dope beat to vybe too. But you have the "key" her. On this track you have a great beat, with dope lyrics to accompany. So just give em you, on something they wanna hear, which is also structured to their ignorance lol. It may seem like a plug to my recent album, but it's just reality. It's all give and take, but I digress. Best O verse I've heard so far. So many quotables. Only problem is that Repeat of the "hands up have you spreading like a jumpin jack" reminds me of how Mike Jones use to repeat his lines lol. First two bars of the hook could be more well written but whatever, still gets the point across. Good song, just has to be better to get the point across. You're both extremely talented. Don't let your talent get hidden behind bad quality and subtle mistakes.

[jrnickz]

We gotta sit down and work on that mixing together bro. I'm willing to put in how ever much time we need to. You guys put together a great one here but the quality we'll take away from it. The sound is off putting, listeners will miss out just because their ears are disgruntled by the sound of the vocals. You've got a good mic, we just gotta work on the overall audio quality. Next lyrics from both of you guys were great. The hook set the pace and you murked the concept. O brought that heat. I like the flow you used Nickz. You've gotten so comfortable on the mic. "Name a motherfucker rappin' deeper than I". Sickening lyrics man. The verse goes right into the hook though. The mixing has to be different. Even slightly, it has to differentiate for the listener. Honestly when it comes to certain aspects of a song you have to dumb it down. Give the listener hints that parts are different cause honestly most people don't have a clue about song structure. They just want a dope beat to vybe too. But you have the "key" her. On this track you have a great beat, with dope lyrics to accompany. So just give em you, on something they wanna hear, which is also structured to their ignorance lol. It may seem like a plug to my recent album, but it's just reality. It's all give and take, but I digress. Best O verse I've heard so far. So many quotables. Only problem is that Repeat of the "hands up have you spreading like a jumpin jack" reminds me of how Mike Jones use to repeat his lines lol. First two bars of the hook could be more well written but whatever, still gets the point across. Good song, just has to be better to get the point across. You're both extremely talented. Don't let your talent get hidden behind bad quality and subtle mistakes.

The reapeat of the line by O was kinda like to explain the line lol I thought my vocals sounded good. I felt Os was a little distorted but I couldn't find anything wrong with mine. Idk I'm tired of the quality of my shit taking away from the talent i have. It makes me wanna just give up on it but I know I have a true talent and I'm not sure I'd forgive myself if I just up and quit ya know? But preciate the feed man. It is what it is

[KidComet]

get eemmmmmmm,

This was a good song, i like that beat,

the quality sounds like that on person? sounds like u put an effect on it.


I rap like a found satan and sold my sold for a peice of pie, gotta be careful there tho, those words dont ffall on deaf ears just to let ya know
4/5

[jrnickz]

get eemmmmmmm,

This was a good song, i like that beat,

the quality sounds like that on person? sounds like u put an effect on it.


I rap like a found satan and sold my sold for a peice of pie, gotta be careful there tho, those words dont ffall on deaf ears just to let ya know
4/5

"LIKE" I found satan lol just finished my vocal booth so my music quality should start sounding much better. I just don't know what the fuck I'm doing mixing wise. I guess I need to find someone with some engineering skillz and some free time and get em to master it for me

[ATLien666]

Your flow on this was nice. The quality is definitely distracting, but I would take this over muddy, hard to hear lyrics; with that being said, you needa work on that because I could see it getting grated after a while. Just experiment and try to find the perfect settings. Anyways, I really liked everything besides the chorus and the second guy's voice. Nice lyrically, but his delivery is kinda weird, idk. Your verse was dope and the instrumental is fire and a good fit for ya'll. Weirdly, the quality that messes up your verses wasn't around on the chorus unless I just didn't hear it. The chorus is a lil' wordy, but I feel like this would fit better as a music video or a performance.

4/5

[jrnickz]

Only 3 feeds? Gotta bump it

[BlakeJay]

Listened to this a minute ago but didn't leave feedback..from what I remember the flow was really good..your lyrics are always on point..of course you gotta do a Lil better with the mixing but you know that..don't really remember the other guys verse..you already know you can spit man nothin more to say..

[jrnickz]

Listened to this a minute ago but didn't leave feedback..from what I remember the flow was really good..your lyrics are always on point..of course you gotta do a Lil better with the mixing but you know that..don't really remember the other guys verse..you already know you can spit man nothin more to say..

Preciate the listen big homie. Yea imI'm currently looking for someone who can mix more thoroughly or a better recording software then garage band.

[Flame Beats]

dope lyrics and flow

4/5

mixing needs work though.