Rembrandt - God Bless America

[ATLien666]

I decided to rerecord this song. Monster's still coming, lol.


Feedback:
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[tmillzy]

This is different coming from you. I like the idea of this but didnt like the beat that much...shouldve been a longer song tbh, 3.5/5 keep it up



Did you get the message i sent

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

you already posted this.
the first version was better though.

[__cas__]

I like this shit. Good lyrics. Shoulda made it longer though. 3.8/5.

[Tha Professor]

kind of a corny beat for me, but eh, whatever. Nice lyrics but yeah, maybe america could have deserved a better beat.

3/5

[yungfamou5]

no lie you sound like Big Sean mixed with the New Boyz lol but regardless this song is straight, Im waiting on that Monster tape, would like to hear a whole cd of songs from you to really tell what kinda artist you are. I rate this 3.5/5 or maybe a 4/5. We need to work on some new shit together

[KidComet]

You do sound like bigsean, that hook needs better mastering.

Not the best I heard from you tho, needs to be longer also. I like the message you were trying to get acros thos, i give this a 3/5

[jrnickz]

i love the concept of this. The mixing was nasty. i wish i could figure out how to mix my ish like this. lyrics are average nothing to special but still a good song. 3.5/5

[ATLien666]

'preciate all the feedback everyone. a nigga didn't want to make this too long, though.

i love the concept of this. The mixing was nasty. i wish i could figure out how to mix my ish like this. lyrics are average nothing to special but still a good song. 3.5/5

I'm still tryna perfect my mixing, but I use mixcraft and just a couple of presets THP linked to years back. I don't know what you record on, but I can send you the links to the presets.

[mykill]

'preciate all the feedback everyone. a nigga didn't want to make this too long, though.



I'm still tryna perfect my mixing, but I use mixcraft and just a couple of presets THP linked to years back. I don't know what you record on, but I can send you the links to the presets.

you really should just put out Monster with what you got. Pretty solid tracklist. I like the older version of this, but this one has its merits as well.

[youngben]

Keep it up bro.

I didn't really like the hook. 3.3/5

[Gibbsy]

I like it. full stop, aint got no criticism , you got a formula that works, the only one thing I don't like about the song is when the vocals do that like deep reverb thing on the hook, would be better without that, but everything else - dope

4.5/5