[Mixtape]Malchii Books-BRKN. Spriits

[KidComet]

Just listened for the first time..this is really good fam..it inspired me..me and you have sorta similar subject matter..I enjoy what you rap about but you just gotta switch it up a Lil more..the rapping is really solid throughout the entire tape..is that really your rapping voice? It seemed forced at times..I remember you saying you didn't like your rapping voice so maybe you're tryna change it up..it sounds good but I think you would be better served using you regular voice..the beat selection is so great on this..this is very close to the sound I want to have for my next tape..My Overall favorite records were God Save Amerikkka and Hostile..Both amazing beats..man you really did great on Hostile..I can literally see myself listening to that song just to bump it..flow was great and the lyrics were on point along with the great beat..that one is a gem..

Overall 4/5 good stuff man..Only critiques I have are that the subject matter gets repetitive and your voice seems forced at times..when you see this respond to me about that, I wanna know if thts actually your natural rapping voice

Anyway, good job fam..keep progressing

Hmmm, I think I was forcing my voice, cause when I rap, I have a naturally high pitched voice, and I thought no one one feel me if I sounded all high pitched so I just stressed my vocals cords a lil

[BlakeJay]

Hmmm, I think I was forcing my voice, cause when I rap, I have a naturally high pitched voice, and I thought no one one feel me if I sounded all high pitched so I just stressed my vocals cords a lil

I can tell you were stressing it a bit..it sounds ok but at certain points you can tell it's forced..maybe experiment with it some more and make it come off a little more natural Great Tape tho!

[TinyPenisProductions]

Though I feel like the subject matter may not be my type imma give it a try and give some feedback.

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Though I feel like the subject matter may not be my type imma give it a try and give some feedback.

Damn homie mad props, I liked all of the songs but Control idk why. But Day x Day and The Devil Follows>>>> I dont listen to this type of music but damn this is dope