Young Ben - Let Me Vent (Prod. By De Froiz)

[youngben]

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Let me know how it is, and what i can improve on.

thanks.



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[martian master]

gon check it out rn

[Gibbsy]

Nice beat!, starts to set a tone right off, when you drop It sounds clean and the flow isn't bad at all but I don't feel that stop and start flow, its choppy but not that that's a bad thing, the mixing/quality is tight and the mastering sounds clean.
Lyrically this is pretty dope just feels a little bland without any adlibs, your delivery is a little monotone to. overall though this is a nice track

3.5/5

[youngben]

Nice beat!, starts to set a tone right off, when you drop It sounds clean and the flow isn't bad at all but I don't feel that stop and start flow, its choppy but not that that's a bad thing, the mixing/quality is tight and the mastering sounds clean.
Lyrically this is pretty dope just feels a little bland without any adlibs, your delivery is a little monotone to. overall though this is a nice track

3.5/5

Hey, thanks for the reply bro. Appreciate it.

Ill take your opinion into consideration when i record again.

Thanks

[Gibbsy]

no problem man, the only thing is the delivery/emotion to your lyrics, WILD OUT on every record and get comfortable on the mic, treat your bars like your speaking them to somebody in person and that will get across the emotion

[youngben]

gon check it out rn

Did ya like it homie?

[martian master]

Did ya like it homie?

yeah bro it's dope
the beats nice and you can really tell you put emotion into it

[youngben]

yeah bro it's dope
the beats nice and you can really tell you put emotion into it

Thanks bro, appreciate you taking the time to listen to it. Means a lot.

[jrnickz]

The beat is dope and I love the concept, but I have to agree wit Gibbs. It's sounds like your not confident with what your saying so the delivery and emotion comes across as non existent. Lyrics are ok though and you have potential, it just sounds like you don't believe in yourself. Think like your the best when you record and your music will show it.

[youngben]

The beat is dope and I love the concept, but I have to agree wit Gibbs. It's sounds like your not confident with what your saying so the delivery and emotion comes across as non existent. Lyrics are ok though and you have potential, it just sounds like you don't believe in yourself. Think like your the best when you record and your music will show it.

Thanks for the advice bro.

I'ma record this again and work on delivery.