Young Ben - Started From The Bottom (Freestyle)

[youngben]

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LYRICS (lines with a * = metaphors/simile/wordplay/puns/etc)
SPOILER
I got
Dreams of that new car
I could sell a couple keys to get the keys to the whip*
Man that don't fear God, always has fear of getting caught by the cops

Started from the bottom, I aint got no fucking bail money
tryna hustle for a dollar guarantees jail for me
trying out this rap thing hopefully i dont fail homie
ashe my blunt and pour some liquor in the holy grail homie

God wont
Answer me
silent strength
in reality
(2x)

Ya enemies give you a higher degree of confidence
Use to wanna slit my wrists but now the people watching him
When you playin' with the drugs theres only two options and
one is guaranteed anyway even if you stop that shit*

everybody wanna be a star
I wanna thank trisha nicole and vic perez
they made me aim so far
so far that il be known as the best

Fourteen years old when i picked up the damn mic
Big Ben back then, couldn't rap for a damn time
thought that i was trash so i gave up for a few years
Tried again, twenty twelve, look at me I'm still here

Shocked a lot of people they never knew I could spit like this
Tryna stay humble, ambitious, quiet, and use this gift
We bleedin' to be vain, puttin diamonds on a crucifix*
Got too many problems, i swear i think i'm losing it

I be goin' so off
tryna prove a point to the non believers
Man i got 'em so lost
They tryna catch up but they cant even see us


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[THA GR8 M8]

pretty wack sry

[martian master]

I fuck with this
the a capella seems just a lil bit too loud though
might just be my speakers though

[youngben]

I fuck with this
the a capella seems just a lil bit too loud though
might just be my speakers though

thanks bro.

yeaa it is loud, forgot to edit it.
my baaaaaad.

[THA GR8 M8]

I fuck with this
the a capella seems just a lil bit too loud though
might just be my speakers though

stop tellin him lies so he can actually improve
u two r obviously friends or somethin cause u comment within both of his threads within a hour
like future would say - be #Honest

[martian master]

stop tellin him lies so he can actually improve
u two r obviously friends or somethin cause u comment within both of his threads within a hour
like future would say - be #Honest

lol I'm not lying I enjoyed it

[youngben]

stop tellin him lies so he can actually improve
u two r obviously friends or somethin cause u comment within both of his threads within a hour
like future would say - be #Honest

i just told him to check out this song cause he liked the other one i did.
Plus one person liking my song doesn't mean that i did nothing wrong, unless thats how you view it.
You didn't say anything that would help me improve either.

[THA GR8 M8]

i just told him to check out this song cause he liked the other one i did.
Plus one person liking my song doesn't mean that i did nothing wrong, unless thats how you view it.
You didn't say anything that would help me improve either.

o k well ur voice is not there at all. not enjoyable. you arent pronouncing things right tbh
ur lyrics are forgettable. no good lines. u thought u had clever lines with the * next to them but they werent really
ur flow was decent but vry choppy
ur quality wasnt good at all
and overall the song wasnt enjoyable


u just gotta completely re approach it next time u do a song cause no one gunna listen to it if u dont work on everything

[youngben]

o k well ur voice is not there at all. not enjoyable. you arent pronouncing things right tbh
ur lyrics are forgettable. no good lines. u thought u had clever lines with the * next to them but they werent really
ur flow was decent but vry choppy
ur quality wasnt good at all
and overall the song wasnt enjoyable


u just gotta completely re approach it next time u do a song cause no one gunna listen to it if u dont work on everything

ok
thanks

[KidComet]

Need work on better delivery and flow.

I don't feel what your saying whatsoever.

Your confidence is up there already tho.

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[My Hubbie]

Need work on better delivery and flow.

I don't feel what your saying whatsoever.

Your confidence is up there already tho.

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this tbh.

but it wasn't really bad the only thing that really botherd me was the qualtiy..

it's like the acaapella was waaay to loud

but it's hard work we all know that lol

[TeedaTeezy202]

You was spitting some real in the beginning but you started losing me as the song was ending.. Nice freestyle tho keep up the work