Freestylin pointers? :P

[Dreezy Baby]

Like i freestyle alot of my songs... and heres an example of 1 of my songs i've freestyled.
like i know i need some pointers so i aint gone trip off whatever any bodys says but take it in to consideration. cuz i dont need tips with writing. im good there But listen and let me know what u guys think. here or there

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=doKYHZc731w[/youtube]

[js11]

Re: Freestylin pointers?

pretty good
i would say just keep moving your flow
just try to stay stable if you know what i mean??...


im a just drop a free just cuz im bored lol


ok,
4 years ago moved away from da streets, but da streets still in me
i dont wanna act like it, but my mind's so windy!
my mind so corrupt, BILL GATES I envy
2 years from now i be where y.m be
begging for studio time, but the hood wont let me
yah boy cant even afford it, who got money to lend me
gotta spread da word, put me in an email and send me
i dont worry bout da chicks, i get all to B.E.N.D
i dont worry bout clothes, all i wear is trendy
i dont worry bout killas, only god can end me!
..fuck what my lips shout, listen to my mind
i went in there, and nothings what i find
i was looking 4 cash, kuz bitch i got fined
former great tagger, boy i never got lined
im always first place man, Ill never be HIND



someone save my mind...

[Dreezy Baby]

Re: Freestylin pointers?

thanks 4 advice. and the freestyle was nice my dude keep dt shit up

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: Freestylin pointers?

Stop trying to sound like Wayne and you're good..
Keep it up

[Dreezy Baby]

Re: Freestylin pointers?

Stop trying to sound like Wayne and you're good..
Keep it up

lol,alright man

[LegendarySwag]

Re: Freestylin pointers?

Think, first of all, if you think you'd come out with better idea's but you gotta be quick if your on the spot, just dont run your mouth.. or you'll stutter like a muhfker.

[Dreezy Baby]

Re: Freestylin pointers?

Think, first of all, if you think you'd come out with better idea's but you gotta be quick if your on the spot, just dont run your mouth.. or you'll stutter like a muhfker.

yea iight

[lilweezyfan1]

Re: Freestylin pointers?

you sound good

[Dreezy Baby]

Re: Freestylin pointers?

you sound good

thanks bro