Ka$h-Fukking God Freestyle

[tmillzy]

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[youngben]

that screech line was horrible imo.

flow is good, and lyrics are good.

but still try to improve. Keep it up.

[tmillzy]

that screech line was horrible imo.

flow is good, and lyrics are good.

but still try to improve. Keep it up.

What made it horrible the actual screech or you just dont mess with the line at all? Still thanks for the feedback bro

[MC_Crary]

Chance in the sig right? That niggas dope, but anyway I thought the higher than screech line was sick. You rode the fuck outta this. I enjoyed your punches in this. You can be hit or miss for me, but this is definitely hit man. Would like to hear a full verse with flow around 2:20. Good job homie

[tmillzy]

Chance in the sig right? That niggas dope, but anyway I thought the higher than screech line was sick. You rode the fuck outta this. I enjoyed your punches in this. You can be hit or miss for me, but this is definitely hit man. Would like to hear a full verse with flow around 2:20. Good job homie

thanks bro. good looking out

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

the screech line was dope but the actual screech was horribile good shit tho you ripped it

[tmillzy]

the screech line was dope but the actual screech was horribile good shit tho you ripped it

Lmao this

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the screech line was dope but the actual screech was horribile good shit tho you ripped it

Lmao this. Thanks bro

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Im really suprised im the only who hopped in this beat. This forum is too dead

[__cas__]

Your delivery is hot. Flow is pretty dope too. 3.8/5 keep it up.

[mykill]

The thing about this beat is that NO ONE should be touching it. All those responses from rappers and stuff lately trying to go at Kendrick is ludicrous. No one's touching him lyrically in the game right now, EVEN DRAKE AND JAY. Budden had the best response out of all of em, and Kendrick is right saying that line. No one in NY is that hot right now... </soapbox>

Now, to comment on this remix you got going here, I think you coulda came with more energy in this. Sometimes it sounds as if you're struggling to get the lines out. If you're gonna go over something like this, you would think that the rapper would pour just crazy amounts of energy and anger into the verses. You gotta give it better feeling. You don't sound hungry to me. Your punches are consistent as always, but where's the lyrical versatility? Where's the crazy insane flow? Where's the wordplay of the Gods? That's what I expect when I hear this beat hit now, thanks to what Sean/Kendrick/JayElec did. It's not a bad track, but it under performed my expectations.

Mykill's Verdict 3.6/5

[tmillzy]

The thing about this beat is that NO ONE should be touching it. All those responses from rappers and stuff lately trying to go at Kendrick is ludicrous. No one's touching him lyrically in the game right now, EVEN DRAKE AND JAY. Budden had the best response out of all of em, and Kendrick is right saying that line. No one in NY is that hot right now... </soapbox>

Now, to comment on this remix you got going here, I think you coulda came with more energy in this. Sometimes it sounds as if you're struggling to get the lines out. If you're gonna go over something like this, you would think that the rapper would pour just crazy amounts of energy and anger into the verses. You gotta give it better feeling. You don't sound hungry to me. Your punches are consistent as always, but where's the lyrical versatility? Where's the crazy insane flow? Where's the wordplay of the Gods? That's what I expect when I hear this beat hit now, thanks to what Sean/Kendrick/JayElec did. It's not a bad track, but it under performed my expectations.

Mykill's Verdict 3.6/5

I really didnt look at it as tryna go hard as kendrick. Its not a response or anything just something to do. As far as the struggling with the lines idk what happened with that i didnt even catch that. Definitley appreciatethe constructive critism but its just the fact that these are just remixes nun original so i just say what i want mane. I really do appreciate though respect bro.