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    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...freestyle.html

    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...52335-fly.html
    Last edited by mykill; 09-02-2013, 07:48 PM.

  • #2
    Fam ya lyrics are on some next level shit 4 minutes of straight bars i aint like how you ended the verse tho but thats a minor flaw.. i was just listening to this the other day, crazy how much you grew from this shit

    https://soundcloud.com/theshylo/he-k...ity-shylo-poyo

    that verse was dope too, but now you actually sound like a rapper, like you sound way more confident now
    twitter.com/basedpoyo

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    • #3
      new name again?

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      • #4
        Cool tattoo “Do not cut your bodies for the dead or put tattoo marks on yourselves. I am the LORD.”
        Originally posted by dametri426
        nigga jay z lips are average size
        Originally posted by Waynasite
        Have you never practiced putting a condom on and masturbating with it on so that when that time comes you won't be a fail

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        • #5
          Originally posted by TinyPenisProductions View Post
          Cool tattoo “Do not cut your bodies for the dead or put tattoo marks on yourselves. I am the LORD.”
          Leviticus right?


          Levitcus 19:19 says, don't cut your hair or shave your beard. I am the Lord.

          The thing is, those are the laws of the old testament, when there was no holy spirit on the land, but in the new testament, the bible says we are under a new law,


          And btw, I got that tattoo before I was serious about God, I wouldnt get another one because this exact reeason, I don't like creating confusing.

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          • #6
            Originally posted by KidComet View Post
            Leviticus right?


            Levitcus 19:19 says, don't cut your hair or shave your beard. I am the Lord.

            The thing is, those are the laws of the old testament, when there was no holy spirit on the land, but in the new testament, the bible says we are under a new law,


            And btw, I got that tattoo before I was serious about God, I wouldnt get another one because this exact reeason, I don't like creating confusing.
            I can't shave...what Wait so does that add more laws or are the past laws gone. Well if they are gone then why wouldn't you get another tattoo
            Originally posted by dametri426
            nigga jay z lips are average size
            Originally posted by Waynasite
            Have you never practiced putting a condom on and masturbating with it on so that when that time comes you won't be a fail

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            • #7
              Originally posted by TinyPenisProductions View Post
              I can't shave...what Wait so does that add more laws or are the past laws gone. Well if they are gone then why wouldn't you get another tattoo
              Levitcius is full of Laws such as those, who knows why it was outlawd back then. It even says not to where clothes with more than one fabric.

              But the past laws, the laws of moses, are gone now, according to the new testament. We are under the holy spirit and the 10 commandments to guide us and direct us now. \

              Just because man, its still a funny topic in Chrisitanity if tattoos are okay or not, some people disagree, some people agree. don't get me wrong, God certainly wouldn't hate me or keep me from heaven, but just to be on the safe

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              • #8
                Did you mix this differently than your old stuff? Lyrical great as usual. Nice variety. Good energy and good delivery. There's not much as far as feedback goes that I can give you on your music, other than little tweaks here and there. I think the best thing you can do moving forward is to start working on your marketing and getting your rap persona in order, because you switch names constantly. Other than there, you're good to go. I like the variety on this more than what you put on your tape. Seems more varied.

                Mykill's Verdict: 4.3/5

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by mykill View Post
                  Did you mix this differently than your old stuff? Lyrical great as usual. Nice variety. Good energy and good delivery. There's not much as far as feedback goes that I can give you on your music, other than little tweaks here and there. I think the best thing you can do moving forward is to start working on your marketing and getting your rap persona in order, because you switch names constantly. Other than there, you're good to go. I like the variety on this more than what you put on your tape. Seems more varied.

                  Mykill's Verdict: 4.3/5

                  I put my mic in a different move, it has more echo, i didn;t know it'd make so much difference in mixing,

                  so now im back in my closet lol

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                  • #10
                    As a rapper I fucks witchu. Not really my kind of thing to rock to, but I'm not the nigga that can't see you have talent based on that. Ya flow is tight, no bunched up lines. I didn't hear any lame lines. You legit as a rapper bruh. I fucks wit it.

                    I don't really get into sound and allatt shit so I'mma leave that for the audiophiles outchea. You coulda recorded this wit a potato for all I care. As long as ya delivery and lyrics are straight. Good shit tho.

                    Lil Wayne, Drake, Chance the Rapper, Skooly, Rich Homie Quan, 2 Chainz.

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