b-roll-ya- put u out_______ young black and gifted vol 1

[b_roll_ya]

one of my songs from the mixtape.... the links in my sig......

[KidComet]

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[WeEeEeEzZzZyYy]

song of the year

[Tuneechi]

best rapper alive

[b_roll_ya]

yall and ya sarcasm....... be real wit it.... lik it or not..... i got bangers........be a real nigga bout it and tel me wat u think

[Lil wayne prezident]

yall and ya sarcasm....... be real wit it.... lik it or not..... i got bangers........be a real nigga bout it and tel me wat u think

just wait for [MENTION=20888]mykill[/MENTION] homey.

he does srs reviews.

[mykill]

First things first...

2. Rules to Posting Music!

a. Before you create a thread for a new audio or written song you must provide proper feedback, or constructive criticism about different aspects of a song or the artists performance on the song, on two different audio/written songs within at least one week prior to posting your song.

b. In order to prove that you have given legit feedback on two written or audio tracks you must post both links at the bottom of your original post. If you do not post two links that lead to your feedback when then your thread will be locked.
Example:

Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post199487
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post199487




Got it? Stop spamming the forum. The point is to build on the community. If you're not helping to build the community, you're not on my good side.

That said, let's get back to the music. Your delivery is flat. Your lyrics are elementary. Mixing is atrocious, well, it's not entirely bad just there's a lot of work to be done. If this is your first work, it's alright. If you've been putting out several tapes, you got a lot of work to do. Your flow seems alright though, so you might want to focus on your mic presence and overall delivery. As you listen to the track, your delivery does improve on verse 2. The only problem is that your lyrical content is so rudimentary that a middle schooler could come up with these raps off the top of his dome. The hook is decent, so there are signs of promise and possible talent. More or less, you need improvement more than anything else. Get to work on some of those categories. Listen to different rappers and be a student to the game. The most important thing to take away from this: post your feedback or I'll just lock it all.

Mykill's Verdict: 2.4/5

[b_roll_ya]

wat kind of bullshit rules is dat..... i gotta do proper feedback on a song... wat the fuck
all des damn rules jus to post yo own music...
none of ya niggaz aint signed or aint no niggaz on here signin niggaz

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