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  • Somethin Real (Light Autotune) REAL OPINIONS ON THIS TRACK

    I'm still in the process of experimenting with Pro Tools 8 and I have a lot more work to do. This is the first recording i did with the program this morning (restless night). It aint take that many takes to record it. One take for the vocals and two for the adlibs. Then i had to add some Boom effects to the vocals and Autotune and A.I.R. filtering to the adlibs. It took me twenty minutes thanks to the transport on my Axiom 25.

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/67791107ede0e527/

    Lyrics:

    I was a malnurished black- ethopian cat
    packin light before the nubian carried me on her back
    young soldier without the holster- gunnin from Iraq
    Thats the trap to you ignorant niggas- matterfact
    It was economic struggle- defecit red
    Seems the money got the Christian women spreadin their legs
    5'5 baptist chick on her knees at Evisu
    Give up the pussy for the root of all evil
    You of all people should understand my life
    And the angst in my plights from the famine and strife
    Hustlin at night with shit that damages life.
    No attonement for the wicked- but god damn it its right
    Some say they'd trade they life and shit just to be Jesus
    Being Reagus wiped down in 73' Caprices
    With the Maybach bodies but we steadily see polices
    Crush our dreams when they stream through the scene with pieces
    They killin black brothers with no lenience- point blank aim
    Poppin shells through 4 5 whip for speedin
    It hurts readin niggas obituaries- lookin at children barried
    knowin that they could've been visionaries
    I keep that black on black for the Senegelese
    and tend to keep my mind on the track when I'm spittin haze
    Niggas got that iron on yo back and they finna blaze
    Love from the civil rights was just a phase- ya dig?
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  • #2
    Re: Somethin Real (Light Autotune) REAL OPINIONS ON THIS TRACK

    The autotune seemed heavy to me, and I would refrain from that much autotune personally.
    The song cut too abruptly.
    Lyrics were straight though, liked them.
    “Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.

    -Adam Smith, Theory of Moral Sentiments

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    • #3
      Re: Somethin Real (Light Autotune) REAL OPINIONS ON THIS TRACK

      I thought it was overall straight, sick lyrics


      Y.O.L.O

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      • #4
        Re: Somethin Real (Light Autotune) REAL OPINIONS ON THIS TRACK

        Lyrics were beyond on point son but i feel it would have been better without the autotune... but thats on you, im jus tryin to give ppl the real opinions they deserve ya feel me? Stay on top and keep puttin those lyrics out!

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        • #5
          Re: Somethin Real (Light Autotune) REAL OPINIONS ON THIS TRACK

          Originally posted by BranD NewZZ
          Lyrics were beyond on point son but i feel it would have been better without the autotune... but thats on you, im jus tryin to give ppl the real opinions they deserve ya feel me? Stay on top and keep puttin those lyrics out!
          I cant think everyone enough for the feedback. This constructive criticism gives the confidence i need to continue recordin (with a little more extensive Pro Tools 101 study).
          SHAROYCE THE DON X The Catalyst (5 song EP) DOWNLOAD NOW

          http://sharoyceantwanakashakeantweezy.bandcamp.com
          http://tishare.com/3s4xbahdnl5b.htm
          http://www70.zippyshare.com/v/45564702/file.html
          http://ul.to/ewbrppdd
          http://www.downloadamixtape.com/?pag...ixtape_id=4387
          http://www.putlocker.com/file/7ECEF496587518A
          http://filepost.com/files/c4cb9165/SHAROYCE_DA_DON!_[5_SONG_EP].zip/

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          • #6
            Re: Somethin Real (Light Autotune) REAL OPINIONS ON THIS TRACK

            I Feel The Lyrics And The Beat Is Great


            Let go, life does get tough
            No need to stress
            Hold you back too much
            -KiD CuDi-

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            • #7
              Re: Somethin Real (Light Autotune) REAL OPINIONS ON THIS TRACK

              Originally posted by YoungTwistOfLife
              I Feel The Lyrics And The Beat Is Great
              Thanks Twist! Maybe we can collab when I get good at recordin and mixin down. I got over 120 pages left of the ProTools 101 to finish imbibin though.
              SHAROYCE THE DON X The Catalyst (5 song EP) DOWNLOAD NOW

              http://sharoyceantwanakashakeantweezy.bandcamp.com
              http://tishare.com/3s4xbahdnl5b.htm
              http://www70.zippyshare.com/v/45564702/file.html
              http://ul.to/ewbrppdd
              http://www.downloadamixtape.com/?pag...ixtape_id=4387
              http://www.putlocker.com/file/7ECEF496587518A
              http://filepost.com/files/c4cb9165/SHAROYCE_DA_DON!_[5_SONG_EP].zip/

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              • #8
                Re: Somethin Real (Light Autotune) REAL OPINIONS ON THIS TRACK

                Aytt whenever you down


                Let go, life does get tough
                No need to stress
                Hold you back too much
                -KiD CuDi-

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