Lookin for some REAL OPINIONS ON THIS TRACK.. Fixed

[Redd Herring]

what it do everyone jus saw wayne live on ustream n im sure most of you did as well...had me geekin when he said gave the pizza to cat, but yeah lemme get back on track wit ya'll and get down to business.... jus recorded the first track for my album n shit ya dig n im tryin to see what ppl think about this track before i start workin on my others n shit.... lemme know what you think in the thread good looks we all YM CMB in our own way we jus gotta show ppl that shit

order is C-Redd, D-Blockz than smooth is last n also chorus

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Straight Fie Pure Desire.mp3 - 3.5 Mb


hope ya dig it lemme know

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: Lookin for some REAL OPINIONS ON THIS TRACK

First verse.
I think you got some REAL potential.
You sound good with auto tune.
You're flow needs work though.. more practice.

the dude on the chorus,the chorus could of been slowed down way more and it sounds like you're yelling. It was the worst part of the song.

Second dude, you did good.. I liked it.
But same thing, try to work on the delivery.
Lyrics weren't to shabby.

Bridge, it was good.. lyrics weren't great. work on flow.
Liked it though


I actually digged this track.

[YoungD]

Re: Lookin for some REAL OPINIONS ON THIS TRACK

Keep doing ya thing and listen to YME Lol ..




Don't quit ya shit cos some says yur wack jus come back harder like a mo fucker


Ya dig ?

[Redd Herring]

Re: Lookin for some REAL OPINIONS ON THIS TRACK

Good looks on the Feedback YME n Youngd

Im the one on First verse i've had more practice than my fella goons on this recordin shit n i tried tell my man smooth you dont gotta holla into the mic but his ears are only so big haha. We're gettin better as we go along but you right practice is the key n without the a key the doors stay locked. "No locked doors!!"



ya boy red here keep it real ya dig

[HiLight]

Re: Lookin for some REAL OPINIONS ON THIS TRACK

good shit guys. keep up the good work