c- xan n dro

[codys]

still aint thought of a name yet haha i don't go by c

feedback : http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ml#post1192014
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-your-cup.html

constructive critisism is apprciated, like i said I'm just barely startin this
still learning to edit too

[ATLien666]

that's love without cupid, though. I like that line.

You can't tell you just started, honestly, but your flow is very slippery and lyrically, the love without cupid line is the best one. I would recommend reciting your verse constantly until you can rap it without looking at paper/phone; it helps delivery more emotion and it also really helps with your flow. Repetition also helps you realize that bars don't fit or what won't work and shit. All in all, not terrible and I'm sure you'll improve more and more over time. keep it up.

[KidComet]

Flow needs a lil more work,
but your voice is good for rap, just keep working on your sound