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[brandon8112]

Pass me the rock I'm a ball hog like Kobe
On some real talk you're all a bunch of phonies
And when it comes to beef I treat that shit like bologna
I got a bunch of bad bitches making wishes just to know me
But if we ever met id say shut up bitch blow me
Homie saying he the best but he knows its so me
Ill leave you lonely and I'll take you out like 3 X's
I made a movie with ya girl and the title is 3 X's
Tell them boys cut it out like a c section
Somebody better tell em I preach it like a Reverend
1-8-7 yeah I send them boys to heaven
But I give em hell, I'm the rap games devil
I deserve a medal, better yet maybe several
Cuz I run this shit like a had an olypmic gold medal
Boy we will let that led fly like we throwing pencils at ya
Got these other rappers mad got em throwing temper tantrums

[Zimmie]

Pass me the rock I'm a ball hog like Kobe
On some real talk you're all a bunch of phonies
And when it comes to beef I treat that shit like bologna
I got a bunch of bad bitches making wishes just to know me
But if we ever met id say shut up bitch blow me
Homie saying he the best but he knows its so me
Ill leave you lonely and I'll take you out like 3 X's
I made a movie with ya girl and the title is 3 X's
Tell them boys cut it out like a c section
Somebody better tell em I preach it like a Reverend
1-8-7 yeah I send them boys to heaven
But I give em hell, I'm the rap games devil
I deserve a medal, better yet maybe several
Cuz I run this shit like a had an olypmic gold medal
Boy we will let that led fly like we throwing pencils at ya
Got these other rappers mad got em throwing temper tantrums

pretty good man ill bold bars i think could be executed a bit better though

[Love Is In The Air]

You're starting to develop your wordplay game, keep it up and in a year you'll be sick.Only thing I can say that I wish someone woulda told me is don't say a single lyric/word that isn't 100% true to YOU.keep at it though I'd like to hear how you flow it.