i aint got a mic yet but give Zimmie a chance!

[Zimmie]

chasing the dream its further then it seems
uh i smoke the rock like charlie sheen
my swags super fucking mean
okay im bout to really go in
these mothafckas think they hot i give em the cold shoulder
i rock better yet i boulder
eating this alive stuck between my molars
pop off your top like a can of cola
outta this world nothing in my system im solar
flatten you like a panel get kicked off the channel
i killed this shit imma let it settle
im gone

[Vocker]

Simple lines tbh

[Zimmie]

Simple lines tbh

appreciate that man ill work on some more sophisticated stuff


btw check out the last two pages of the ether thread if you want to see i think my best material.

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...thread-13.html

[brandon8112]

Check out my verse. Its on this part of the forum and its titled Need Feedback. I need some opinions. [MENTION=61746]Vocker[/MENTION]