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yeah what it do on here manezz haha i in the studio this very moment and we about too finish up some more track but i wanted ya'll to get a feeling of where were headed wit out stuff
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[quote="BranD NewZZ"]yeah what it do on here manezz haha i in the studio this very moment and we about too finish up some more track but i wanted ya'll to get a feeling of where were headed wit out stuff
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nice doo lovin the barsComment
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right... not even finished yet trust me when this beat done ya'll gonna dig it or hate i dunno but both cats will still dig it haha
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1st verse- Didn't sound like much dissing until after some bars. Anyways they were disses, which means they're not clever and anyone can think of them off the top. "Bitches pull my hair" doesn't sound like a diss, or a good one if it's intended as one.
2nd verse- Kind of the same as the others.
3rd verse- Yours wasn't any better then the others, sounds like a bunch of fillers talking about how you're black and they're white, you're black, gratz. Try to make the bars match up in pairs.“Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.
-Adam Smith, Theory of Moral SentimentsComment
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HERES YOU SOME DEFINTION AS IM SURE YOU AINT TOUCHED THE STREET SO YOU DONT KNOW NO SLANG OUT THIS SHIT FIGURE I'D HELP YOU OUT WIT A LILOriginally posted by trillphill
TALK:
LIGHT MY BLUNT UP REAL QUICK
YOU LIGHTIN ONE TOO?
HOW MANY PPL LIGHTIN BLUNTS?
THATS NOT JUS MY LIGHTER YOU HERE
(INTRO)
YEAH
EVERYBODY GOON SQUAD ON DECK
YOU CANT EVEN TOUCH US
CAUSE WE STAY WITH THE STACK
IF YOU SEE US ON THE MAP
YOU KNOW WHERE WE AT
FREDROCK
YEAH
FREDROCK
YEAH
VERSE:
SEE I AINT WEEZY F BABY -IM SAYIN DONT COMPARE ME CUZ IM MY OWN GENRE
CALL ME RED HERRING - SELF EXPLANITORY
AKA TREASURE CHEST - SELF EXPLANITORY
I KNOW EVERYTHING CAUSE IM THE BEST - SELF EXPLANITORY
YOU CANT EVEN HATE ON ME - MUSICS TOO NICE FOR TRUE HATE WE ONLY WE GOT PPL WHO ENVY AKA THERE JADED LIKE SHIT
SUICIDE SQUAD MAN YOU CAN FUCKIN PLAY WIT ME - SAYIN GO AHEAD THROW SHIT AT US
I DONT GIVE A FUCK CAUSE IMMA FUCKIN PLAY WIT IT - SAYIN ANYTHING YOU GUYS THROW IS SO SOFT SO ILL JAM TO IT NOT KNOW ITS A DISS
EVERYBODY KNOW IMMA COME N IMMA HANDLE SHIT - IM GONNA COME TO YA AND GET YA WORKED ON
ALL MY FUCKIN BUSINESS YEAH THATS WHAT IM ABOUT - ALL I CARE ABOUTS MUSIC N THE WHOLE GAME OF IT N NOONE WILL TAKE THAT
IMMA FUCKIN TAKE MY GUN N SHOVE IT UP IN YA MOUTH - IMMA PUT A GUN IN YA MOUTH N PUT YOU DOWN
I DONT GIVE A FUCK YOU IS NOTHIN BUT A BITCH - SELF EXPLANITORY
SEE YOU IN THE CORNER WITH THE COPS LIKE A SNITCH - SAYIN ALL YA'LL DO IS GET BUSTED BY SOME POLICE WITH NO SMARTS
I KNOW HOW YOU GO UP IN OREGON - OREGON SOFT LIKE SHIT
YEAH IM TALKIN TO YOU STEEZY YOU BE LISTENIN - MEANING SECRETLY THIS DUDES JAMMIN TO OUR SHIT HE JUS A HATA
WE THE GOON SQUAD N WE STAY GOIN WRECKLESS - WE DO WHAT WE GOTTA DO
WE DONT GIVE A FUCK WE'LL LEAVE YO ASS HEADLESS - SELF EXPLANITORY
WHAT YOU GONNA DO YOU IS NOW BREATHLESS - SELF EXPLANITORY
I GO SO HARD N I AM SO WRECKLESS - I'LL DO WHAT EVER I NEED TO DO TO GET WHAT I NEED
YEAH WE THE GOON SQUAD FOR LIFE -SELF EXPLANITORY
I DONT GIVE A FUCK IMMA GO FOR YOUR WIFE - IMMA FUCK YOUR BITCH(WIFE AS IN WIFEY/ GIRLFRIEND
OH
N IMMA TAKE AWAY YOUR LIFE - HERE IM SAYIN THAT YOUR GIRL LIKED ME SO MUCH ILL JUS REPLACE YOU
YEAH THATS A THREAT YOU CAN SEND THAT SHIT TO MY HOUSE - SEND YOUR BITCH TO MY HOUSE
YEAH THIS OUR HOUSE - ITS NOW MINE N YOUR GIRLS HOUSE HAHA
WE SHARE IT - SELF EXPLANITORY
THIS THE GOON SQUAD YEAH YOU KNOW THIS MUSIC BLARIN - MUSICS BLASTED
ALL THE FUCKIN WINDOWS THEY STRAIGHT IN THE AIR IN - WHEN WE BLAST THIS SONG WE PUT ALL OUR WINDOWS UP
WE FUCKIN GO EVERYWHERE IN WE STARIN - SELF EXPLANITORY
AT THESE MOTHER FUCKERS N WE DONT EVEN CARE NOW - SELF EXPLANITORY
EVERYBODY KNOW THAT THESE BITCHES PULL MY HAIR NOW - MEANING: YA'LL SUCK SO BAD YOU MAKIN ME PULL MY HAIR OUT
WHAT YOU GOT YOUNG N RUTHLESS YOU ARE JUS SCARED NOW - SELF EXPLANITORY
CUZ THE GOON SQUAD ON THE SITE WHO COMPARES NOW - WE CAME TO HQ TO TAKE OVA N NOONE COMPARES TO US
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lolOriginally posted by BranD NewZZ
Definitions? I understand your CAPS LYRICS I'M SAYING YOU'RE MATERIAL ISN'T ANYTHING SPECIAL AS A DISS, FOR EXAMPLE THE GUN DOWN YOUR THROAT BAR, THAT'S NOTHING SPECIAL AND IT'S WACK, IT SHOWS NO LYRICAL SKILLS, I CAN TYPE "I'M GONNA SHOVE THE AK IN YA FACE AND MAKE IT SPRAY". THERE'S NOTHING TO IT WHICH MAKES IT WACK.
Now I'll proceed to critique it some more since you posted all of it in a hectic fashion. Check my typing in blue.“Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.
-Adam Smith, Theory of Moral SentimentsComment
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Right but i didnt type this n than record this was jus off the top off the head before work ya feel me so yeah of course theres not much thought we put a beat on n hopped straight on unprepared cuz thats how you freestyle. i dont even listen to the beat til im up on the mic as well so for this being the fireman beat its not bad cuz i couldnt really do this beat to begin with.... but i feel you on the no thought when i free style i think of pretty much nothing but slang cuz the wordz n meanings mean almost nothin what they really do ya know? its our code out here... you play this for someone out here they"d tell you what everyline ment axactly as i did
Well you have to make up your mind. You're calling him a bitch which means he's a snitch but you're using "See you in the corner with the cops" as part of the simile. There's no need to state he's like a snitch since you're implying it by calling him a bitch and on the corner with the cops. I think it was done for the sake of being able to rhyme them. Should've been "see you on the corner with the cops, yea you a snitch"
as for this here you getting it wrong im saying this dudes always busted like a snitch cause snitches always get busted or cought up if there lucky they get busted
"Straight in the air in"? Some awkward grammar going on.
NO CEILINGS MAN so they never stop goin up aka they jus go into teh air cause we have no ceilings
It's phrased in that you have bitches pulling your hair out.
???? what you mean i never said out all that is jus a way of sayin is if i didnt hear SS i wouldnt be pullin my hair so i said they pullin my hair cause its there fault ya know?
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