Nothin On Ya Freestyle

[yungfamou5]

Nothin' On Ya
Nothin' On Ya [Freestyle] by FamousBueller - HulkShare

My Mixtape Purp 7 drops tomorrow

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[MC_Crary]

I think this song has potential to be a good hype song. Hook needs a little more aggression and maybe more adlibs. Lyrics are fitting for a track like this. Like the flow at the beginning. . Liked the second verse a lot better than the first one. As far as the mixing goes, beat could be a louder. The parts where you're piecing the verses together are kinda noticable. Maybe clean that up a bit. Endings kind off rough. You just stop rapping and it goes off, doesn't feel finished. Like Isaid this could be a good song, with a little more work.

[yungfamou5]

Appreciate the feedback

[mykill]

Not bad at all. Lots of good punches. Mixing was a step above your usual, so that's great. The better your quality, the more ability you'll have to compete with others in your lane. I think this track works the way it is, only because you said it was a "freestyle". Don't really need to make it sound finished or anything like that, but if you did it could stand up being a track too.

Mykill's Verdict: 4.1/5

[yungfamou5]

Not bad at all. Lots of good punches. Mixing was a step above your usual, so that's great. The better your quality, the more ability you'll have to compete with others in your lane. I think this track works the way it is, only because you said it was a "freestyle". Don't really need to make it sound finished or anything like that, but if you did it could stand up being a track too.

Mykill's Verdict: 4.1/5

Appreciate it, mixtape will b out sat