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  • [Written Battle]Dizzy.T.Hooligan V. Haikes[Vote Now]

    Challengerizzy.T.Hooligan
    Person Challenged:Haikes


    How many rounds:2 Rounds One Verse Each Round,
    Bar Amount:No Less Than 8 No More Than 32
    Battle Type:Written


    [Verse 1:]Dizzy
    Haikes Can't Kill Me He More Liable To Kill Himself He On That Suicide Tip
    I Mean Come On Get A Grip Take A Seat And Watch A Master A Work
    Relax And Take Notes Cuz Everybody Knoes You And Yo Sqads A Joke
    Haikes Please Give Up And Itll Be Over Dont Even Write A Verse
    Just Take This Loss Like An Iraqi Soldier Im Throwin Shots
    And He Throwin Stones Like Boulders Haha And This Aint Hot
    This Aint Even Off the Dome This One Was Off The Shoulders
    And I Aint Even Hot This Was Just A Warm-Up Now Im Waitin
    On Skim To See What He Gonna..Do Its Dizzy And Im Gone Im Done With You
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    RunTellDat!!:Mays '91 The ALBUM 4th Qtr.2012
    Follow Me On Twitter @HiMyNameIsShawn

  • #2
    Re: [Written Battle]Dizzy.T.Hooligan V. Haikes

    Originally posted by Dizzy.Tha.Hooligan
    Challengerizzy.T.Hooligan
    Person Challenged:Haikes


    How many rounds:2 Rounds One Verse Each Round,
    Bar Amount:No Less Than 8 No More Than 32
    Battle Type:Written


    [Verse 1:]Dizzy
    Haikes Can't Kill Me He More Liable To Kill Himself He On That Suicide Tip
    I Mean Come On Get A Grip Take A Seat And Watch A Master A Work
    Relax And Take Notes Cuz Everybody Knoes You And Yo Sqads A Joke
    Haikes Please Give Up And Itll Be Over Dont Even Write A Verse
    Just Take This Loss Like An Iraqi Soldier Im Throwin Shots
    And He Throwin Stones Like Boulders Haha And This Aint Hot
    This Aint Even Off the Dome This One Was Off The Shoulders
    And I Aint Even Hot This Was Just A Warm-Up Now Im Waitin
    On Skim To See What He Gonna..Do Its Dizzy And Im Gone Im Done With You

    Ight dizzy, i got you.

    It's honestly a joke that you think you can compete
    I'm a shark in the water, brah you just dead meat.
    and i dont need long lines to get my point across.
    and you girl prayin to my dick like a nun to a cross.
    Im god to this forum, dizzy you just my bitch.
    lemme guess? your cool cuz you wear postle or fitch?
    Just give me the prize now, i already won.
    but this is extra torture and i do it for fun.
    Im like saw, i twist and turn ya body around.
    But im lighting, 1 strike and you hit the ground.
    You can try if you want, but you got nothin on the squad
    I aint wasting my time, i freestyled all these bars
    I dont need a 32, to strait up murk you.
    I honestly could do it if i only had 2.
    These my last line, so let them leave a impact.
    I burn your fucking brain and leave ur skull cracked.
    Tha Carter Franchise <3

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    • #3
      Re: [Written Battle]Dizzy.T.Hooligan V. Haikes

      [Round 2 Verse 1]:Dizzy
      Imma Joke Haha Bitch You Silly Imma Beast
      And You Not Even Allowed In this Village
      Imma Ape In This Shit You A Mouse On Da Ground
      Imma Do Wat it Takes To Keep Yo Ass Shut Down
      Im Satan On This Shit Triple 6 Who Want It Now
      And I Aint Even Cool Im Hot No Postle No Fitch
      Only Time Im Playin Round Is When Im Playin Witcho Bitch
      If You Get A Prize It Aint Cuz You Win Its Cuz I Say Fuck it
      Gon And Give It To Him Cuz This Shit Is Torture And I Dont
      Play To Win Im In It Just For Smiles And Grins All Star Player
      Motherfuckin Vetrean Goin For The Slam Leave You Layin
      Like A Bitch 1 Shot 2 Shot The 3rd One For You Kid Leave
      Yo Ass Tagged Like Whoo Kid I Did Dont Try This
      Rest In Peace Haikes Moment Of Silence........
      RunTellDat!!:Mays '91 The ALBUM 4th Qtr.2012
      Follow Me On Twitter @HiMyNameIsShawn

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      • #4
        Re: [Written Battle]Dizzy.T.Hooligan V. Haikes

        Originally posted by Dizzy.Tha.Hooligan
        [Round 2 Verse 1]:Dizzy
        Imma Joke Haha Bitch You Silly Imma Beast
        And You Not Even Allowed In this Village
        Imma Ape In This Shit You A Mouse On Da Ground
        Imma Do Wat it Takes To Keep Yo Ass Shut Down
        Im Satan On This Shit Triple 6 Who Want It Now
        And I Aint Even Cool Im Hot No Postle No Fitch
        Only Time Im Playin Round Is When Im Playin Witcho Bitch
        If You Get A Prize It Aint Cuz You Win Its Cuz I Say Fuck it
        Gon And Give It To Him Cuz This Shit Is Torture And I Dont
        Play To Win Im In It Just For Smiles And Grins All Star Player
        Motherfuckin Vetrean Goin For The Slam Leave You Layin
        Like A Bitch 1 Shot 2 Shot The 3rd One For You Kid Leave
        Yo Ass Tagged Like Whoo Kid I Did Dont Try This
        Rest In Peace Haikes Moment Of Silence........


        Not allowed in the village? Im the freaks who fucking kill you.
        And I always win the battle cuz no one fucking feels you.
        Dizzy, the Hooligan? who you fooling man?
        You a generic young and ruthless man
        it's all cool that im a moose
        cuz its huntin season and dude you are a goose.
        This dudes hatin cuz im gettin paper fast?
        If you satan ,i put fuckign a halo round ur ass
        Moment of silence? address me as heiness
        YNR is gone but we still HQ's finest.
        You call youself a ape?
        No banana's, just your girl feeding me grapes
        cuz im the king round here
        your warming up, im a freezing polar bear
        2 last killer bars, leave you fucking stung.
        Inhale this bitch, im cancer to your lungs.
        Tha Carter Franchise <3

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        • #5
          Re: [Written Battle]Dizzy.T.Hooligan V. Haikes[Vote Now]

          Well it looks like its over..

          Damn you both had some good shit..but i thought YME had some lines that stood out.

          I'm a shark in the water, brah you just dead meat.
          Dizzy, the Hooligan? who you fooling man?
          If you satan ,i put a fuckin halo round ur ass
          Inhale this bitch, im cancer to your lungs.


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          • #6
            Re: [Written Battle]Dizzy.T.Hooligan V. Haikes[Vote Now]

            I'm a shark in the water, brah you just dead meat.= too similiar to waynes line in David banners 9mm = Imma shark in the water N you jus long john silver!!

            you feel me right there? jus for that your at loss wit me cause theres no creativity you coulda at least said "jus like a great white im lookin for my bext bite" or something along those lines

            now YME im not sayin you sucked at all you held your own but as soon as i heard that shark line i lost all interest and was thinking damn... this dudes on weezys nuts i think. but who knows maybe he dont got none

            dizzy had some nice lines as well but his bars were all consistent with eachother n i felt they connected

            its a tough choice and dizzy i wish your mic wasnt broke son this woulda had made a good battle track for the both of you

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            • #7
              Re: [Written Battle]Dizzy.T.Hooligan V. Haikes[Vote Now]

              Originally posted by BranD NewZZ
              I'm a shark in the water, brah you just dead meat.= too similiar to waynes line in David banners 9mm = Imma shark in the water N you jus long john silver!!

              you feel me right there? jus for that your at loss wit me cause theres no creativity you coulda at least said "jus like a great white im lookin for my bext bite" or something along those lines

              now YME im not sayin you sucked at all you held your own but as soon as i heard that shark line i lost all interest and was thinking damn... this dudes on weezys nuts i think. but who knows maybe he dont got none

              dizzy had some nice lines as well but his bars were all consistent with eachother n i felt they connected

              its a tough choice and dizzy i wish your mic wasnt broke son this woulda had made a good battle track for the both of you
              lmao they are totally different but you just dont like me, so i expected this.
              Tha Carter Franchise <3

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              • #8
                Re: [Written Battle]Dizzy.T.Hooligan V. Haikes[Vote Now]

                chill yo i didnt say who i picked on as teh winner or nothin did you read it you jus skimmed over it? well anyway they have exact same meaning n everything no difference in my book but as least i switched the words to attempt to make it sound original.. anyway i see its cool for an SS member to steal a line but apparantly when one of us does it its a crime n theres no proof of the line i took i mean shit at least i provided the proof right away shit you want me to throw a sound sample up haha cuz i can if you'd like.... IMO There is no winner they were both jus not on point enough for me to even bother now sry dizz for wasting your time postin but YME the drama queen aka 50 cent jus ruined this thread for me

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                • #9
                  Re: [Written Battle]Dizzy.T.Hooligan V. Haikes[Vote Now]

                  Originally posted by BranD NewZZ
                  chill yo i didnt say who i picked on as teh winner or nothin did you read it you jus skimmed over it? well anyway they have exact same meaning n everything no difference in my book but as least i switched the words to attempt to make it sound original.. anyway i see its cool for an SS member to steal a line but apparantly when one of us does it its a crime n theres no proof of the line i took i mean shit at least i provided the proof right away shit you want me to throw a sound sample up haha cuz i can if you'd like.... IMO There is no winner they were both jus not on point enough for me to even bother now sry dizz for wasting your time postin but YME the drama queen aka 50 cent jus ruined this thread for me
                  Well if you're not gonna vote, then i dunno why you posted here lol. They are not asking for feedback. So i guess both your posts will be ignored.


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                  • #10
                    Re: [Written Battle]Dizzy.T.Hooligan V. Haikes[Vote Now]

                    Originally posted by BranD NewZZ
                    chill yo i didnt say who i picked on as teh winner or nothin did you read it you jus skimmed over it? well anyway they have exact same meaning n everything no difference in my book but as least i switched the words to attempt to make it sound original.. anyway i see its cool for an SS member to steal a line but apparantly when one of us does it its a crime n theres no proof of the line i took i mean shit at least i provided the proof right away shit you want me to throw a sound sample up haha cuz i can if you'd like.... IMO There is no winner they were both jus not on point enough for me to even bother now sry dizz for wasting your time postin but YME the drama queen aka 50 cent jus ruined this thread for me
                    lmao who is this dude?
                    fucking nobody with no talent..
                    If I'm 50 then I say..
                    [youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4hi1-CG094[/youtube]
                    bitch ass..
                    Tha Carter Franchise <3

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                    • #11
                      Re: [Written Battle]Dizzy.T.Hooligan V. Haikes[Vote Now]

                      Fredd and danny just put out the rules and yet ya'll are back at it again viewtopic.php?f=12&t=6286 whats rule #1?, chill out. YME he was giving you real feedback you always takes things personal appreciate someone is actually being real instead of "OMG dude that was sooo sickkk!"


                      Y.O.L.O

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                      • #12
                        Re: [Written Battle]Dizzy.T.Hooligan V. Haikes[Vote Now]

                        both yall did good but i think YME did better

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