Official Post All Writtens Thread!

[YoungFire420]

Basically what the title says. Post your writtens here. Give feedback, real feedback. So everyone, just post writtens in here.

Ill go a throw a verse, i guess ill start
Imma going Simpson on the beat, and i aint talkin Bart
I got heart, Im and im heading to the top
With the SS, yeah are bars be so hot
But im just starting with a small verse, im more busy with the blunt
But you knoww its Young Fire, and you know i gotta stunt.

Small verse to start out. Everyone post some verses. Give feedback!

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: Official Post All Writtens Thread!

I think you did good, could of been more creative. A little boring.

Ima go


Lemme show you how i murder with only a 8
Killer punchlines , On time. not late.
SS run the forums, check out the thread.
I can make it rock even when we got no bed
I got long hair, dont care let baby girl pull it.
Haikes aka live life to the fullest
Suicide Squad, but she really like my bod
And Ill only smoke your blunt if u stuff it wit a quad

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Re: Official Post All Writtens Thread!

Bitch Im Blazin Hotta Than A Sauna No hotta Than the Summa
In the Winter Bitch I Does This Runnin It No Rihanna No kanye No Jigga
Still Roc'n The Nation Dizzy That Nigga Gottem Patiently Waitin
On The Day My Mixtape Drops When It Does Its Gonna Fuck The World
So Raw Uncut Shit My Verses Should Be Obeyed Just Like The Law
911 Such An Emergency When They Here This Shit They Stop/Freeze
Dizzy Verses Is Deadly Dont Fuck With Me Moment Of Clarity........
They Scared Of Me Now Jason On The Track I killem All Wow
No Chris Brown But Im Taken Em All Down They Funny like Clowns
I laugh,
No Birdman Or Baby But
I Strapped
I Dont Need Yo Dap Cuz Yo Bitch
Gimme Hugs
This Choopa Aint Slow But Dat Bitch
Sendin Slugs
And Dizzy Got No Heart I Shows
No Love

[IAmJay]

Re: Official Post All Writtens Thread!

Man I'm getting higher than a bird
When I'm back to record, I'ma be the best you heard
I'm 14 and I ain't afraid to admit
I'm just tired of this whack and beefing shit
tryna prove all of ya how Jay really spit
been on a vacation, still ain't gonna stop
I'm the best, and I will never drop
just stay running from the cops,
niggah if you want battle, I hope you ready
I'm on my shit, always been so steady
no lying, I been real
fuck niggahs don't really know how I feel
so let me finish up this post
burn all ya niggahs like burnt toast
Mothafucka!

[Def Kool]

Re: Official Post All Writtens Thread!

This Verse Is A Courtesy Of Dtrick A.k.A Deezy Pack
Put This On My PLaque
I Keep The Stack
My Verse Kept Packed
The Ink Still Intact, Chemistry React
I'm A Micmac
When I Mack The Mic
23's On My Feet Call Me Great MIke
I Beat The Beat Like I Turn On Ike
Gold Chips Down To The Klondike
I'm trying To Go Right But I Think I Got The Wrong Right
Trying To Reach Fame But I Got The Wrong Light
It's A Detour Too Premature To Call It A Departure
The Future's So Unsure
Never Follow The Procedure

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Re: Official Post All Writtens Thread!

Errbody Like Me So i think You Should Change-Up
Cuz When You Hit The Stage They Booin In Anger

Fast Ball Flow You Cant Fuck With This Nigga
Im Up At The Plate I Am Hungry 4real Bruh

Like What Is My Dinner Six Wack Tracks
And A Buch of Pretenders Thats Is Just A Snack

Thats Is Not Gonna Fill Me Up Flows Very Weak
Dont You Think You Should Build Up 4real Cuz

Its Hard To Be Number 1 With No Number 2 Bruh
You Should Step Up Your Bars If You Dont Thats A Charge

Penitentiary Bars These Are Stonger Than Yours Are
Outerspace Flow No Stacks On Deck Shit

Spit Some Real Shit And Stop Pretendin Thank Me
Later For Your Aplauds And Winnins This Is Not The End

It Is just The Beginnin If You Follow My Steps
One Day You Could Be This....Lemme Stop

Imma Tiger No Lyin I Gotta Killer Ass Flow
So Pretty Soon Youll Be Dying Dizzy Fly And

Im Out Of This World Sittin In The Sky
Shining As Brite As A Star And Not Even Tryin

[Artille]

Re: Official Post All Writtens Thread!

16 to apologize: Toward JRock

You dropped a fire as song that made us bounce
We didn't think it was you, so we had to pounce
We thought it was you makin them fuckin fake accounts
We were fooled, now we are all down for the count
In the end it was trillphill, i thought it was skim
I never would have imagined that it would ever be him
But in the end, it turns out that he's a troll
That pussy should switch his name to trollpholl
So this is a big sorry to JRock
He had Tha Studio fooled like a balk
Keep up the good shit that you deliver
Keep makin' the fuckin forums quiver
Don't worry about these pussies runnin' they mouth
Just in your next joint, give HQ a shout out
Yeah... we just want to confirm
Rappers like you keep Tha Studio firm.
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Not to dickride in anyway, I just felt that we all owe JRock an apology.

EDIT: LOL I take back my 16. JRock is a foney

[YoungFire420]

Re: Official Post All Writtens Thread!

The studio's gettin better, but one users gettin lamer
Hes postin verses that arent his, well i guess ill shoutout to the creator
Hahaahaha, Im just clownin on this dude
He had to go look up lyrics cause he knew he was gunna lose
Ill leave that dude lookin like he spilled hot sauce all on his shirt
Yall hear them sirens goin off? Its a Young Fire's bout to kill this verse alert
Im knockin down this 10, but i aint referring to pins
Yalll knew this verse would be fire, before i even had begin
You heard im the best, its true! You probably heard it through the grape vine
Its a hate crime! Im raping this 10, but i aint talkin no dateline

Come on. Everyone post a verse. Get this thread poppin. Post a diss. Post a verse about anything come on.

[Fredd]

Re: Official Post All Writtens Thread!

What the fuck am I doing here? Damn fuck my life
This is too much for me please nigga cut a slice
I swear I'm about to give up and just get some ice
Get some paper and fuck school, yeah that'd be nice
I'm begging please someone get me outta here
"Fredd, I'll give you a hand" that's what I wanna hear
It's like this every monday, every fuckin friday
Every test, every homework, shit I deserve a payday
School is not for me man, who am I lying to?
Happy days, I've only had one, maybe two
I gotta go back to my music shit, do you agree?
I know you do Dad, but you left me back in '93
So you gettin money huh? Help your boy out
Shit you're busy yeah, I have no doubt
This is why I hate you, you never gave a fuck
When I make it big, I promise you'll have no luck

Let's calm the fuck down I don't want no problems
This is the reason why I had to shot em
I mean thaught em man I am no 50 cent
I wouldn't mind it though, at least I would pay my rent
But back on my depressed shit, I'm still screwed
This french teacher'll never see me in a good mood
No one gets me, they say I'm a real dick
Then I scream "Fuck y'all with that giant dick"
At least I know Em's white and you fuckin don't
I'll be known as a human and you fuckin won't
Get off your laughing shit and just be a man
Even shut me up man I believe you can
Your last words will mean my first smiles
I'll probably forget you during my first miles
I'll write you a letter, it starts by "My dear..."
Shit my pen's failing now, now I'm outta here.

- Written during a french class the other day



EDIT: btw, I didnt give any feedback to the ones posted before, but you already know you are real beasts.

[ThaRockstar]

Re: Official Post All Writtens Thread!

What the fuck am I doing here? Damn fuck my life
This is too much for me please nigga cut a slice
I swear I'm about to give up and just get some ice
Get some paper and fuck school, yeah that'd be nice
I'm begging please someone get me outta here
"Fredd, I'll give you a hand" that's what I wanna hear
It's like this every monday, every fuckin friday
Every test, every homework, shit I deserve a payday
School is not for me man, who am I lying to?
Happy days, I've only had one, maybe two
I gotta go back to my music shit, do you agree?
I know you do Dad, but you left me back in '93
So you gettin money huh? Help your boy out
Shit you're busy yeah, I have no doubt
This is why I hate you, you never gave a fuck
When I make it big, I promise you'll have no luck

Let's calm the fuck down I don't want no problems
This is the reason why I had to shot em
I mean thaught em man I am no 50 cent
I wouldn't mind it though, at least I would pay my rent
But back on my depressed shit, I'm still screwed
This french teacher'll never see me in a good mood
No one gets me, they say I'm a real dick
Then I scream "Fuck y'all with that giant dick"
At least I know Em's white and you fuckin don't
I'll be known as a human and you fuckin won't
Get off your laughing shit and just be a man
Even shut me up man I believe you can
Your last words will mean my first smiles
I'll probably forget you during my first miles
I'll write you a letter, it starts by "My dear..."
Shit my pen's failing now, now I'm outta here.

- Written during a french class the other day



EDIT: btw, I didnt give any feedback to the ones posted before, but you already know you are real beasts.

Damn fred now i kno why you like my music haha.

[YoungFire420]

Re: Official Post All Writtens Thread!

Time to BUMP this thread with a flame little freestyle.

Just sit back, read this then pass the green
Dont talk, youre talking to the master, me
You wont find another motherfucker with more money than me
Hahha, i be pushin more key's than Stevie
Believe me, me and my crew yeah we run this bitch
Best in this bitch, ya better admit
Talk shit about me, is just something you dont do
Cause my crew like the letter V, they'll come after you.


Yall, come on. Everyone post some freestyles...

[IAmJay]

Re: Official Post All Writtens Thread!

Boy if you want a battle, then here I am man
gotta rep Mars All-Star, shoutout to the fam
I don't discriminate, so stop tryna hate
I always get to my shit on time, I'm never late
this the master piece, I am on no leash
it can't be explained, I'm a damn beast
just agree with me, my flow is unbeatable
I'll get at you anytime, my reality is unbelievable
you wanna succeed? but first you gotta achieve
this award, man I'm invincible I never bleed
so just believe, that I am a Master
you can never reach my level, so try and use a ladder
you see I just do me like I do my team
and I'm always in like a fucking movie scene.