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  • #13
    Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

    What about this one?

    All On The Line - http://limelinx.com/files/c084ccef72...806e1166131be8
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    • #14
      Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

      Why are you using LimeLinx?

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      • #15
        Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

        Originally posted by Lil' Jay
        What about this one?

        All On The Line - http://limelinx.com/files/c084ccef72...806e1166131be8
        This sounds like you're reading it, you need to stop reading and remember what you wrote then spit it.
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        • #16
          Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

          Originally posted by ThaRockstar
          Originally posted by Lil' Jay
          What about this one?

          All On The Line - http://limelinx.com/files/c084ccef72...806e1166131be8
          This sounds like you're reading it, you need to stop reading and remember what you wrote then spit it.
          Actually I'm not writing nothing. That's how I been finishing these tracks fast....
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          • #17
            Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

            Originally posted by skimdudee420
            Why are you using LimeLinx?
            Oh, I can't use that? lol.

            I'll stop using it, if that's what you trying to mean.
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            • #18
              Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

              Originally posted by Lil' Jay
              Originally posted by skimdudee420
              Why are you using LimeLinx?
              Oh, I can't use that? lol.

              I'll stop using it, if that's what you trying to mean.
              Nah. Just since SS started using it, everyone is using it? Its kinda weird, i guess were trend starters haha. No one used limelinx ever before we did hhaha.

              But anyways. My feedback on the song. Wasnt really feeling the hook, beat was pretty ill. And with your verse, it does sound like you are reading it. Even if its a freestyle, it sounds like you're reading. But lyrics, they are kinda blan. Like no punchlines really. No multies. Start writing lyircs, if this was a freestyle. And start working on punchlines and multies. Then you'll be good.

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              • #19
                Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

                the real love track is pretty good just work on the flow and some of ur words didnt go nicely but good track and i cant listen to the other tracks b/c limelinx aint workin for me

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                • #20
                  Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread!

                  Hot new songs coming soon.
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                  • #21
                    Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread! (New Songs, Mixtapes, News, etc.)

                    Lil' Jay - The Game Ain't Ready 4 Me - http://usershare.net/y3wq5iuyf2al

                    Unfinished version, full coming soon!!

                    FEEDBACK PLEASE!
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                    • #22
                      Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread! (New Songs, Mixtapes, News, etc.)

                      Lil' Jay - Pride of the Best - http://usershare.net/zd12rcs5lvot

                      a leak off my upcoming mixtape, "Best of the Best". It's gonna be fire, FEEDBACK please!

                      No Autotune either. I was just sounding like it.
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                      • #23
                        Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread! (New Songs, Mixtapes, News, etc.)

                        Definately sounds like autotune. Vocals dont sound good either. I think the mic is too close to your mouth. That echo on your voice is kinda annoying. Also again, your lyrics are not really good. You rhyme words like "got" and "hot". Start doing multies and rhyming bigger words. Thanks for the SS shoutout though.

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                        • #24
                          Re: Lil' Jay Official Thread! (New Songs, Mixtapes, News, etc.)

                          i like the song pride the best. its pretty good.
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