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That is NOT track of the month. Stop posting that everywhere.
The only reason why i labeled my thread that is because i wanted people to listen to it. My bad! For some reason people dont fuck w/ me
A little patients maybe?
Patience doesnt get me views. Nobody wants to click on Official Morphine Roberts Nobody wants to give feedback. I give everybody feedback... I try to listen to everyone's track
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That is NOT track of the month. Stop posting that everywhere.
The only reason why i labeled my thread that is because i wanted people to listen to it. My bad! For some reason people dont fuck w/ me
All you gotta do is send active people in the studio messages and tell them to check out the song. Ill check it out in a bit and give feedback. Dont go mis-labeling songs just to get people to view the thread/song. Cause you did that, when i went to the thread i didnt even listen to the song...
That is NOT track of the month. Stop posting that everywhere.
The only reason why i labeled my thread that is because i wanted people to listen to it. My bad! For some reason people dont fuck w/ me
All you gotta do is send active people in the studio messages and tell them to check out the song. Ill check it out in a bit and give feedback. Dont go mis-labeling songs just to get people to view the thread/song. Cause you did that, when i went to the thread i didnt even listen to the song...
I mislead no one because I know my shit has the potential as sounds just as good as half of these cats in here.
You probably never listen to my shits anyway. Nobody fucked with Wasted, Somethin Real, or Humpty Dumpty Buddy either.
I spent my hard time on them mothafuckas. I managed to get half way through the Pro Tools 101 just to try to compete n w/ yall, but my efforts winded up unnoticed. I invested all my time and money into a dream that i had back when i was 15. GOD DAMN IT! I give feedback to a lot of yall... I just thought that yall would return the same requited showmanship back to me. I'mma try that PM shit
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Wasted - I thought it was pretty goood. Like the chorus's, and verses were on point too.
Chevy - Really sick track. I like how you had different flows on each verse.
That is NOT track of the month. Stop posting that everywhere.
The only reason why i labeled my thread that is because i wanted people to listen to it. My bad! For some reason people dont fuck w/ me
A little patients maybe?
Patience doesnt get me views. Nobody wants to click on Official Morphine Roberts Nobody wants to give feedback. I give everybody feedback... I try to listen to everyone's track
Maybe if you stop being a little bitch and complaining and arguing about stupid shit all the time people will actually give you the time of day, you can hate if you want but who songs get's the most views and downloads on HQ
(not fake downloads btw like some peple here)
Jcock you just need to gtfo because you just jack songs, you're not shit compared to the worst on this site.
First off I liked how you put fuck in your regular typing but *** the words in the lyrics lol.
On the real, the beat was nice and had some bass kicking which I like. The genre you chose to do (and I know you're fully aware) is one that is over-used and shitty after so many songs like Ice cream paint job, etc, BUT I will say that yours is an exception for me since you have quality lyrics for the most part even for this genre, more-so than those shitty artists getting rich. I haven't listened to everything on this site since I'm not on that much, but of all the stuff I've heard on here this is the only song that will make my ipod.
Now for more critiquing I suppose.
I realize that you're rapping about whips and stuff like that but I think it was too excessive going back to a different tricked out car every now and then. My example would probably the little reference to the Daytons at the end of the first verse. Granted it wasn't that bad but I noticed it. I suggest on starting off with the baller talk and car and (as you did sort of) working your way into a little more broad and maybe how fly you are and not your car anymore, use the car as a way to smooth on into the song then start going off.
In the second verse you used a car reference once in the beginning then got away from cars and talked about other things, that's what I would stick to more.
Not my favorite genre, played out, but this works; good overall song. I would vote it song of the month.
*What do you go by as your official name (artist)?
Jcock you just need to gtfo because you just jack songs, you're not shit compared to the worst on this site.
First off I liked how you put fuck in your regular typing but *** the words in the lyrics lol.
On the real, the beat was nice and had some bass kicking which I like. The genre you chose to do (and I know you're fully aware) is one that is over-used and shitty after so many songs like Ice cream paint job, etc, BUT I will say that yours is an exception for me since you have quality lyrics for the most part even for this genre, more-so than those shitty artists getting rich. I haven't listened to everything on this site since I'm not on that much, but of all the stuff I've heard on here this is the only song that will make my ipod.
Now for more critiquing I suppose.
I realize that you're rapping about whips and stuff like that but I think it was too excessive going back to a different tricked out car every now and then. My example would probably the little reference to the Daytons at the end of the first verse. Granted it wasn't that bad but I noticed it. I suggest on starting off with the baller talk and car and (as you did sort of) working your way into a little more broad and maybe how fly you are and not your car anymore, use the car as a way to smooth on into the song then start going off.
In the second verse you used a car reference once in the beginning then got away from cars and talked about other things, that's what I would stick to more.
Not my favorite genre, played out, but this works; good overall song. I would vote it song of the month.
*What do you go by as your official name (artist)?
I've been an avid comic reader/ aspiring artist since I was a child ,and Morphine was a character that i created in my High School years. But ever since I fell in love with my girl n shit I used both of our middle names as a moniker (Sharoyce Antwan). It just sounds more professional
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Hello World! I dropped by my homeboy's studio today inorder to work on a track. We got the just of it laid down and he should be mixin it down in the near future. I'm bout to get started on a new track tonight because I've been on instrumental download fever. I also need to jump on this futuristic Flo rida joint that Kwame handed to me. I'mma upload an unmixed version of the songs a lil later.
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Girls peep the swag and they see ya boy major
All the bitches chasin wanna be my situation
I eeped the innuendo- I can read insinuation
Chill w/me tonight- I made dinner reservations
You a star studded lady- picture prefect- breathtaking
I can see us in a frame w/ a baby- or maybe
I could see us on a mashpotato boat-all gravy
Smooth sailin- wind up in yo hair- all wavy
I'mma offer you a slice of the goodlife- shawty taste it
solidify the bond- choose a ring- sign the papers
We can sky out- throw the passports- n hit the vapors
Tommorow I'll be takin you to Vegas- I'm playin
Unless you kiss my lips to signify that you'll be stayin
Its all Juiceman- okay then!
You make my world go crazy- give a thug motivation
Show yo boy unconditional behavior
fuck w/ me.
(Chorus)
5'5 Brown Eyes- Fat ass
You make me wanna get it up w/ you
and turn you to a Huckstable
As long as you fuckin w/ ya boy
I am confortable
I aint gonna bullshit
baby I'm in love w/ you
(Repeat Chorus)
I just cant shake this feeling- she levitates the wood
she good- her pussy got tha magnetic pull
She got the best I've had- you cant better good./
Fine thoroughbred bitch from the hood- hood
The heads on her shoulder dont worry bout it tippin
she's gifted- college bound- devoute intuitions
her piece of mind came just when I thought mine was missin
in life- she ethereal w/ spiritual lights
Her vibe says she's the best shorty built for his size
Rollin eyes to the niggas w/ pride- get it girl
Reminds me of a savior- she was meant to fix the world
Mother Teresa! hardly any miles like a Kia
Contender slash Christian she choose to fight w/ Jesus
Plus she got the features of a strongminded Diva./
Freak n the bed- love potent like Cohiba
She's always by my side when I need her
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