Cas - Losin Weight (freestyle)

[__cas__]

Taking it a back a minute. Just bars. 4 mins++




feed1: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ml#post1227022

feed2: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ml#post1226660

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Who is the troll that keeps repping me about lwhq and ktt? Show yourself lmao.

[ATLien666]

I ain't even gonna lie; I really can't fuck with anybody rapping for 4 mins, including myself. It's just too hard to hold attention through the entire thing while staying wholly consistent. The one thing I find that helps with straight rap songs are a rapper's personality and his/her's ability to make even the dumbest shit sound entertaining instead of just focusing on lyrics. I did fuck with this, but I found myself getting kinda bored halfway through. I found the third verse to be the best, the flow you got on that made it so much more entertaining to listen to. Your delivery even seemed to reflect it. Tons of good lines in this, not too much replayability imo, but if this was my first time listening to you, I would wanna check out more of your shit so good shit.

[__cas__]

Thanks man. Yeah I never make tracks this long, I just haven't straight up rapped in a while and wanted to lay some verses.

[mykill]

Smooth flow, as expected. There were a lot of good punches in this too. I didnt really mind the length of the freestyle. Great mixtape track. I like verse 2 and 3 a lot, but verse one has its gems in it too.

Mykill's Verdict: 4.1/5

What exactly is up with your tape? Still working on it?

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

like said its too long i got bored like after 2 min, not too many can pull off a 4 minute song with straight bars and keep it entertaining definitley with this beat choice

[__cas__]

Smooth flow, as expected. There were a lot of good punches in this too. I didnt really mind the length of the freestyle. Great mixtape track. I like verse 2 and 3 a lot, but verse one has its gems in it too.

Mykill's Verdict: 4.1/5

What exactly is up with your tape? Still working on it?

Yeah man. I have a ton of tracks done, I just want to make sure I find the sound that I think is right for me before I put it out there.

like said its too long i got bored like after 2 min, not too many can pull off a 4 minute song with straight bars and keep it entertaining definitley with this beat choice

Word. I feel you though. I picked this beat because I wanted the bars to stand out. I've been making a lot of radio friendly shit lately and had to take it back one time lol. Appreciate the feed.

[THA GR8 M8]

ur breath control is woat m8


it was soundin good but after hearin u breathe loudly like 4 times within the first 45 seconds i had to shut it off ASAP

[__cas__]

ur breath control is woat m8


it was soundin good but after hearin u breathe loudly like 4 times within the first 45 seconds i had to shut it off ASAP

lmao theres only one clearly audible one in the first verse.. im not gonna go back and re-take or edit the vocals on a 4 minute freestyle. Word though.

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

why the fuck would you do a 4 minute freestyle?
im not even gonna listen to this shit because its 4 minutes long, and not a song.
ahhh, fuck it, i listend anyway, and fell asleep halfway through, then proceeded to press the power button on my computer.
thanks for creating a new product to help make you go to sleep faster.

[__cas__]

why the fuck would you do a 4 minute freestyle?
im not even gonna listen to this shit because its 4 minutes long, and not a song.
ahhh, fuck it, i listend anyway, and fell asleep halfway through, then proceeded to press the power button on my computer.
thanks for creating a new product to help make you go to sleep faster.

lmao get the fuck out of my thread you faggot ass troll. Go promote that poverty blog off the 100th page on google.

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

lmao get the fuck out of my thread you faggot ass troll. Go promote that poverty blog off the 100th page on google.

you just lost your chance at being rich.
good luck with your rap career here on lwhq though.

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lmao get the fuck out of my thread you faggot ass troll. Go promote that poverty blog off the 100th page on google.

you just lost your chance at being rich.
good luck with your rap career here on lwhq though.

[__cas__]

you just lost your chance at being rich.
good luck with your rap career here on lwhq though.

lolllll I don't even like talking shit about what I got but my bank account would hurt your feelings my man. I rap because I like to rap. Good luck trying to talent search on fan-site forums for your dirt blog though.