[Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

[YoungMoneyEnt]

WRITTEN BATTLE.
Challenger: Haikes
Challeneged: Lil Jay
Battle: 8-16 bars.
2 verses each.

There's always this constant pressure to impress all these fools.
Lil Jay can be mechanical, watch me work em out like tools.
I'm a Suicide Soldier,So you know I'm stayin strapped.
Musically I'm Lyrically, I murder lil man with rap.
My punchlines come harder than tyson's left jab.
Kamakazi flow, but I dont fuck wit a arab.
Lil Jay is a little boy, he a generic wayne.
You on 4th and 1 and i bet this pussy dont gain.
Haikes is the whole team, im linebacker strong.
Lil Jay leaves the state, Haikes goes hong kong.
And I do you like Jrock, the truth will be exposed.
I bet Gay's girl feels it from her head to her toes.
and Lil Jay gunna blow it, watch him fucking fail.
Tell your girl come over, I can feel her up like brail.
I already got dizzy, do i gotta get you to?
the life off a SS soldier is brought among you.

Lil Jay you must post your verse by 8 Central

[IAmJay]

Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

Now I'm about to go insane, Haike let me be the niggah to make you look lame
I'll extinguish you like fucking flames, after I'm done with you, I'll guarantee you won't look the same
There go's SS the crew, you the only one looking like a damn fool, I'll work your broken ass like a tool
Yess you the SS bitch, unlike you, I'm not on no fake shit, so meet me on my space ship
nah niggah you will never get to my level, I'm probably the only niggah hotter than the devil
I'm murking you bitch I derserve a medal, I will stomp on you like a fucking pedal
So have I thought you a lesson to not come against me, it will take you forever to ever try to win me
but the only time you'll win will be never, I'm always here like I want this forever
I'll tutor you I'm sure you'll get better, you is just soft like a feather
so go back to wherever you came from, I'm just getting started so don't think I'm done
I bet your ass be living like a bum, but this shit getting serious, I'll leave your ass so curious
after I'm done with you man, you'll be so hideous
so Frankie you best remember me man, I'll be your teacher and help you understand
that I am the man, so you and your crew already know not to step in my land BITCH!

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

Now I'm about to go insane, Haike let me be the niggah to make you look lame
I'll extinguish you like fucking flames, after I'm done with you, I'll guarantee you won't look the same
There go's SS the crew, you the only one looking like a damn fool, I'll work your broken ass like a tool
Yess you the SS bitch, unlike you, I'm not on no fake shit, so meet me on my space ship
nah niggah you will never get to my level, I'm probably the only niggah hotter than the devil
I'm murking you bitch I derserve a medal, I will stomp on you like a fucking pedal
So have I thought you a lesson to not come against me, it will take you forever to ever try to win me
but the only time you'll win will be never, I'm always here like I want this forever
I'll tutor you I'm sure you'll get better, you is just soft like a feather
so go back to wherever you came from, I'm just getting started so don't think I'm done
I bet your ass be living like a bum, but this shit getting serious, I'll leave your ass so curious
after I'm done with you man, you'll be so hideous
so Frankie you best remember me man, I'll be your teacher and help you understand
that I am the man, so you and your crew already know not to step in my land BITCH!

I got you..

Lil Jay said he insane, well im mentally ill. I came back for more pussy, bitch how does it feel?
Haikes on the grind, throw a shot at ss? Lyrically my flow throw a shot at ur chest.
Understand we on top, call me SS king. Mark on ur head from my million dollar ring.
I don't step in your land, trust me I got my own. 20 acres of land, but in the crib's my redbone.
Im on robotic flow, oops i gotta charge. . Lil Gay loves my bars, super long and hard.
He be on that super fag shit, so lance bass. Haikes, top grade boy from swagga class.
So you can have the last verse, take it i dont need it. take my advice, and MJ just beat it.
I got Young fire and ruthless in this fucking building. sharp dagger flow boy u better start sheilding.
Get a suit of armor for your fucking body, you be gayer than that phony hit ricky bobby.
I know I got the votes coming, u gon need promotion. SS title wave, i see u swimmin in the ocean.
I hear you knockin, but i dont let u in. Im a sting ray, u just steve irwin.
Im so cocky wit my rhymes, Say it wit swag. Not fabulous but i will throw u in the bag.
I will do 14 bars, you dont wanna picture if i used the last 2. Itd look like how it looks when freddy is threw
So lemme sum it up, Lil Gay has nothing. Haikes it the boy that I know you just be bumpin.

U might get me, im not in the mood aha

[Krono]

Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

I haven't read either yet, but Jay, your diss is a story. Break it down more so you don't have lines running this long <----.

[IAmJay]

Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

Nice.

Haikes the SS king? More like the SS queen, mothafucka you the only thing
stop tryna show off with your crew SS, stop tryna think that ya the best
I will murk you like it's never been done, bitch when I'm done it's gonna be 1 to 1
in the end you won't be undefeated, you got MJ flow so you just beat it
I really am gonna take SS down, I'm the king bitch give me my crown
don't bring that homo shit around my town, I will mute you, fuck a sound
it's going down Frankie fuck your crew, SS doesn't need you
I'm not going down without a fight, it's going down tonight
I'm right, I never lie I'll kill SS all of ya will die
YNR? Tha Rockstar? A fake is what you really are
Young Fire, you're not famous but I still beg you retire
frankie you so cocky with rhymes? Well you should check mines
ha, I'm a fucking maniac, watch out niggah don't catch a heart attack, your ass is pure whack!

[YoungFire420]

Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

Voted for Haikes.

[Young Corruption]

Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

both were good but i think haikes took it.

[Artille]

Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

Voted for Haikes.

Jay, you should shorten your bars.

[IAmJay]

Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

Hmmmmm something is not right here.... :suprised:

[YoungFire420]

Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

Hmmmmm something is not right here.... :suprised:

What you mean?

[IAmJay]

Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

The only people that voted where the ones from tiny chat yesterday, and it's suprising how they ALL voted for Haikes.

[YoungFire420]

Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

The only people that voted where the ones from tiny chat yesterday, and it's suprising how they ALL voted for Haikes.

Welll ill explain why. Yours didnt flow good, at alll. You really didnt have any interesting lines. I mean neither of yall really came super hard. But Haikes had better flow and better lines overall.

And you cant bring up the tinychat bullshit. We just invite all the most active people from the studio section to come chat everyday. That has nothing to do with it.