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  • #25
    Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

    Originally posted by skimdudee420
    Originally posted by Safe_Kid
    LMAO

    Honestly, was there a better line than this? Vote for jay

    in the end you won't be undefeated, you got MJ flow so you just beat it
    The voting is done, for one.

    And two, he kinda jacked that line from Haikes.
    "So you can have the last verse, take it i dont need it. take my advice, and MJ just beat it."
    I was reversing it on him. But I'm catching up....
    Cash Flow Ent

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    • #26
      Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

      [quote=Lil' Jay]
      Originally posted by skimdudee420
      Originally posted by "Safe_Kid":166d2h5e
      LMAO

      Honestly, was there a better line than this? Vote for jay

      in the end you won't be undefeated, you got MJ flow so you just beat it
      The voting is done, for one.

      And two, he kinda jacked that line from Haikes.
      "So you can have the last verse, take it i dont need it. take my advice, and MJ just beat it."
      I was reversing it on him. But I'm catching up....[/quote:166d2h5e]

      Oh my bad, but it doesn't matter much. The line was funny as hell but still voted jay.


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      • #27
        Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

        [quote=Lil' Jay]
        Originally posted by skimdudee420
        Originally posted by "Safe_Kid":223s1tke
        LMAO

        Honestly, was there a better line than this? Vote for jay

        in the end you won't be undefeated, you got MJ flow so you just beat it
        The voting is done, for one.

        And two, he kinda jacked that line from Haikes.
        "So you can have the last verse, take it i dont need it. take my advice, and MJ just beat it."
        I was reversing it on him. But I'm catching up....[/quote:223s1tke]

        Yeah i know. But stilll, you kinda jacked it. And you already called concede. Battle is over. I told you to wait it out, you said nah.

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        • #28
          Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

          [quote=skimdudee420]
          Originally posted by Lil' Jay
          Originally posted by skimdudee420
          Originally posted by "Safe_Kid":268kl5yx
          LMAO

          Honestly, was there a better line than this? Vote for jay

          in the end you won't be undefeated, you got MJ flow so you just beat it
          The voting is done, for one.

          And two, he kinda jacked that line from Haikes.
          "So you can have the last verse, take it i dont need it. take my advice, and MJ just beat it."
          I was reversing it on him. But I'm catching up....
          Yeah i know. But stilll, you kinda jacked it. And you already called concede. Battle is over. I told you to wait it out, you said nah.[/quote:268kl5yx]

          It was 5-1 lol what do you expect?
          Cash Flow Ent

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          • #29
            Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

            [quote=Lil' Jay][quote=skimdudee420]
            Originally posted by "Lil' Jay":1x255y0k
            Originally posted by skimdudee420
            Originally posted by "Safe_Kid":1x255y0k
            LMAO

            Honestly, was there a better line than this? Vote for jay

            in the end you won't be undefeated, you got MJ flow so you just beat it
            The voting is done, for one.

            And two, he kinda jacked that line from Haikes.
            "So you can have the last verse, take it i dont need it. take my advice, and MJ just beat it."
            I was reversing it on him. But I'm catching up....
            Yeah i know. But stilll, you kinda jacked it. And you already called concede. Battle is over. I told you to wait it out, you said nah.[/quote:1x255y0k]

            It was 5-1 lol what do you expect?[/quote:1x255y0k]

            Yeah but it wasnt even a full day after the poll began. Not everyone had voted yet...

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            • #30
              Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

              haikes murked em, no point in voting lol
              It's always Carter Season in Portland.

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              • #31
                Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

                [quote=skimdudee420][quote=Lil' Jay]
                Originally posted by skimdudee420
                Originally posted by "Lil' Jay":cl1nds6f
                Originally posted by skimdudee420
                Originally posted by "Safe_Kid":cl1nds6f
                LMAO

                Honestly, was there a better line than this? Vote for jay

                in the end you won't be undefeated, you got MJ flow so you just beat it
                The voting is done, for one.

                And two, he kinda jacked that line from Haikes.
                "So you can have the last verse, take it i dont need it. take my advice, and MJ just beat it."
                I was reversing it on him. But I'm catching up....
                Yeah i know. But stilll, you kinda jacked it. And you already called concede. Battle is over. I told you to wait it out, you said nah.
                It was 5-1 lol what do you expect?[/quote:cl1nds6f]

                Yeah but it wasnt even a full day after the poll began. Not everyone had voted yet...[/quote:cl1nds6f]

                But they liked Haikes verses better and ya told me that the flow wasn't good, so I thought everybody would think the same.
                Cash Flow Ent

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                • #32
                  Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

                  [quote=Lil' Jay][quote=skimdudee420][quote="Lil' Jay":3r8lscyt]
                  Originally posted by skimdudee420
                  Originally posted by "Lil' Jay":3r8lscyt
                  Originally posted by skimdudee420
                  Originally posted by "Safe_Kid":3r8lscyt
                  LMAO

                  Honestly, was there a better line than this? Vote for jay

                  in the end you won't be undefeated, you got MJ flow so you just beat it
                  The voting is done, for one.

                  And two, he kinda jacked that line from Haikes.
                  "So you can have the last verse, take it i dont need it. take my advice, and MJ just beat it."
                  I was reversing it on him. But I'm catching up....
                  Yeah i know. But stilll, you kinda jacked it. And you already called concede. Battle is over. I told you to wait it out, you said nah.
                  It was 5-1 lol what do you expect?[/quote:3r8lscyt]

                  Yeah but it wasnt even a full day after the poll began. Not everyone had voted yet...[/quote:3r8lscyt]

                  But they liked Haikes verses better and ya told me that the flow wasn't good, so I thought everybody would think the same.[/quote:3r8lscyt]

                  Everyone has different opinions. Like i think, that people should have flow in battles. Definately if they have recorded tracks before. I like to see the same flow on tracks, writtens, and battles. Ya know.

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                  • #33
                    Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

                    But it wasn't just you who told me, that my flow wasn't good. Artille and them....
                    Cash Flow Ent

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                    • #34
                      Re: [Written Battle] Haikes VS. Lil Jay

                      Originally posted by Lil' Jay
                      But it wasn't just you who told me, that my flow wasn't good. Artille and them....
                      Re-reading your verses I think they were creative, but the way you wrote it made it look like your flow is bad. I suggest next time, if you write your bars the same, to use a semi colon to separate your bars better. That way people know where each bar ends.

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